Recent Comments

6/24/24, 10:18 AM
Love it, i really need to read how all of this ends!

7/1/24, 4:50 PM
@[Chileanguy93](/user/show/946977) Well I've been working on the outline for the next part and it's already gotten split into two separate stories. I'm not sure how long the next chapter will be or if it will need to be several parts, but I'm working on it and it will continue!
Preppyboyish
7/1/24, 11:54 AM
I love this story, it's making me horny and I want to dress preppy too now. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
6/30/24, 1:03 PM
wow.. this is just wonderful.
6/29/24, 11:19 PM
wonderful and wait
Muscle-Flex
6/29/24, 4:52 PM
Great example of short-story writing. Simple premise with good description and psychological insight so we get sucked right into the story quickly and then a fun surprise ending. Nice job!

6/29/24, 9:58 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) This comment made my day! I am so glad you enjoyed it :D
6/29/24, 7:49 PM
Part 1 already promised to have a good premise, this part 2 confirms it and has a good pace on the changes and on the information we recieve, excited for part 3!
6/28/24, 1:57 PM
Keep this up, love where it’s heading. Expand a lot

6/29/24, 7:20 PM
@[JockPupTraxxx](/user/show/26244) Thank you! Like I said to Ruffcub, you'll probably have to be patient for the next part, I want to make sure I know what to do with Jacob being a pup... But there is definitely another part on the way!
6/28/24, 11:12 AM
This gets better and better! Can't wait for the next part!

6/29/24, 7:19 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Thanks! You might have to wait a few days for the next part... I don't know that much about puppy play and how to write about it, so I'll do what is needed to get some experience and inspiration!
6/28/24, 10:00 AM
I'm a bit surprised that Zach didn't want to deage ~~(is that a word?)~~ again. I mean, I'm not sure how many 40+ year olds would oppose being 27 again. The premise is excellent and I'm very interested on seeing where it's going, but I admit that the current Zach is a creep, and I hope he gets what's coming for him (what can I say? I'm a sucker for a happy ending)

6/29/24, 7:16 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) The way I see it, Zach can barely remember having been 27: it's like he's always been in his 40s, and he's completely happy with that and with being a bear. I haven't decided how his story will end yet, but there is a high probability that he will lose control of the marker at some point...