Recent Comments

6/27/24, 8:00 PM
This is very much a story that shouldn't be rushed. It's focused on charicter mindset and self realization is what makes it so good. Take your time and I would love to read more in the future! On another note, I had kind of hoped that J would make D 'wear' something explicitly sexual like a cockring, or a buttplug or something. What you did write was a lot more interesting, but if they do another "Wear what I tell you" bet in the future I would love to see something like that! Thanks for writing!

7/1/24, 4:52 PM
@[Lotharel](/user/show/909244) Oh there definitely will be some of that in the future, but it's got to build to that. I've got plans to expose David to some wilder stuff, but even though he trusts Jacob he'll need to build up to just how wild Jacob is on the inside.
6/24/24, 10:18 AM
Love it, i really need to read how all of this ends!

7/1/24, 4:50 PM
@[Chileanguy93](/user/show/946977) Well I've been working on the outline for the next part and it's already gotten split into two separate stories. I'm not sure how long the next chapter will be or if it will need to be several parts, but I'm working on it and it will continue!
Preppyboyish
7/1/24, 11:54 AM
I love this story, it's making me horny and I want to dress preppy too now. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
6/30/24, 1:03 PM
wow.. this is just wonderful.
6/29/24, 11:19 PM
wonderful and wait
Muscle-Flex
6/29/24, 4:52 PM
Great example of short-story writing. Simple premise with good description and psychological insight so we get sucked right into the story quickly and then a fun surprise ending. Nice job!

6/29/24, 9:58 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) This comment made my day! I am so glad you enjoyed it :D
6/29/24, 7:49 PM
Part 1 already promised to have a good premise, this part 2 confirms it and has a good pace on the changes and on the information we recieve, excited for part 3!
6/28/24, 1:57 PM
Keep this up, love where it’s heading. Expand a lot

6/29/24, 7:20 PM
@[JockPupTraxxx](/user/show/26244) Thank you! Like I said to Ruffcub, you'll probably have to be patient for the next part, I want to make sure I know what to do with Jacob being a pup... But there is definitely another part on the way!
6/28/24, 11:12 AM
This gets better and better! Can't wait for the next part!

6/29/24, 7:19 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Thanks! You might have to wait a few days for the next part... I don't know that much about puppy play and how to write about it, so I'll do what is needed to get some experience and inspiration!