Recent Comments

Preppyboyish
7/1/24, 11:54 AM
I love this story, it's making me horny and I want to dress preppy too now. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
6/30/24, 1:03 PM
wow.. this is just wonderful.
6/29/24, 11:19 PM
wonderful and wait
Muscle-Flex
6/29/24, 4:52 PM
Great example of short-story writing. Simple premise with good description and psychological insight so we get sucked right into the story quickly and then a fun surprise ending. Nice job!

6/29/24, 9:58 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) This comment made my day! I am so glad you enjoyed it :D
6/29/24, 7:49 PM
Part 1 already promised to have a good premise, this part 2 confirms it and has a good pace on the changes and on the information we recieve, excited for part 3!
6/28/24, 1:57 PM
Keep this up, love where it’s heading. Expand a lot

6/29/24, 7:20 PM
@[JockPupTraxxx](/user/show/26244) Thank you! Like I said to Ruffcub, you'll probably have to be patient for the next part, I want to make sure I know what to do with Jacob being a pup... But there is definitely another part on the way!
6/28/24, 11:12 AM
This gets better and better! Can't wait for the next part!

6/29/24, 7:19 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Thanks! You might have to wait a few days for the next part... I don't know that much about puppy play and how to write about it, so I'll do what is needed to get some experience and inspiration!
6/28/24, 10:00 AM
I'm a bit surprised that Zach didn't want to deage ~~(is that a word?)~~ again. I mean, I'm not sure how many 40+ year olds would oppose being 27 again. The premise is excellent and I'm very interested on seeing where it's going, but I admit that the current Zach is a creep, and I hope he gets what's coming for him (what can I say? I'm a sucker for a happy ending)

6/29/24, 7:16 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) The way I see it, Zach can barely remember having been 27: it's like he's always been in his 40s, and he's completely happy with that and with being a bear. I haven't decided how his story will end yet, but there is a high probability that he will lose control of the marker at some point...
6/28/24, 3:51 AM
Oh yes 😈

6/29/24, 7:13 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) I had a feeling I'd see you in the comments, I'm glad I wasn't wrong! And it will only get muskier, stay tuned πŸ˜‰