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7/12/24, 3:14 PM
Another great chapter! 🔥 Can't wait to read more! 🥰
7/12/24, 8:28 AM
Would love to be Matt in this scenario. Loved this chapter. ❤️
7/12/24, 5:02 AM
Amazing story! I love the unique concept and your writing is exceptional. You do a fantastic job of developing the story with vivid images and very relatable emotions. I'm so glad I finally rewarded myself with this read, and I can't wait to see what's next!! Thanks for sharing your wonderful work, Kyle!
7/12/24, 2:00 AM
Eh, too soft for my taste unless it's just the prologue. We need a part 2 where Shadow boy actually gets broken
7/12/24, 12:37 AM
Maybe we should see Night-Flyer sealed in his own gimp suit?
Anonymous
7/11/24, 10:42 PM
luv this story want more so hot
May 1, 2024
7/11/24, 9:23 PM
This was great. It would have made an amazing series!
7/11/24, 6:15 AM
The long wait was worth it, I always wanted to see a future slave who would resist the rite of submission more. Since chapter 8 I've been wanting Cody's cowboy daddy to be tamed. It may be that in the future you will make an even more mentally resilient guy, but it turned out very well the way it was. And I would say this was Cody's best chapter, even better than his conversion chapter. PS: I really want to see a glossary of all the rules created by Dexter, the ones in this chapter were especially good.
7/11/24, 1:35 AM
Wow. Great writing!