Recent Comments

7/12/24, 5:02 AM
Amazing story! I love the unique concept and your writing is exceptional. You do a fantastic job of developing the story with vivid images and very relatable emotions. I'm so glad I finally rewarded myself with this read, and I can't wait to see what's next!! Thanks for sharing your wonderful work, Kyle!
7/12/24, 2:00 AM
Eh, too soft for my taste unless it's just the prologue. We need a part 2 where Shadow boy actually gets broken
7/12/24, 12:37 AM
Maybe we should see Night-Flyer sealed in his own gimp suit?
Anonymous
7/11/24, 10:42 PM
luv this story want more so hot
May 1, 2024
7/11/24, 9:23 PM
This was great. It would have made an amazing series!
7/11/24, 6:15 AM
The long wait was worth it, I always wanted to see a future slave who would resist the rite of submission more. Since chapter 8 I've been wanting Cody's cowboy daddy to be tamed. It may be that in the future you will make an even more mentally resilient guy, but it turned out very well the way it was. And I would say this was Cody's best chapter, even better than his conversion chapter. PS: I really want to see a glossary of all the rules created by Dexter, the ones in this chapter were especially good.
7/11/24, 1:35 AM
Wow. Great writing!
Takanashi
7/10/24, 6:48 PM
Una excelente historia, estuve revisando todos los días para leer alguna actualización de esto. Sin duda valió la pena la espera. Hay una parte casi al final donde poner que Dexter dice algo pero creo que es George el que habla. Fuera de eso me encantó todo. Muchas felicidades por una historia tan bien escrita
7/10/24, 1:56 PM
Looking forward to more! Great story.