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1/18/26, 8:55 PM
No head shave?!

1/18/26, 9:49 PM
@[Meister](/user/show/958190) good suggestion. Haven't told Ray's story yet.
1/18/26, 8:25 PM
Loving this story, can’t wait for Luke to be humiliated further.
1/18/26, 8:13 PM
This is a great story
1/18/26, 5:40 PM
Wow. I didn't expect this series to continue. While I'm not a fan of fisting, I really enjoyed reading this.
1/18/26, 5:27 PM
Interesting
1/18/26, 3:14 PM
WOW! This was fantastically engaging. I love the hypnotic elements. I am really enjoying this storytelling and your writing style. I hope he gets a lot of erotic pleasure from the aroma of men in the gym. That would be so nice for me!
1/18/26, 10:53 AM
So hot!! Hope you feel inspired for chapter 2 soon!
1/18/26, 7:20 AM
I enjoyed the story and the description of the process of transforming and training Chris and Mark. However, I did have a bit of a problem with all the emphasis on how straight the boys were. I thought the speed of their transformations would have been more believable if there had been more emphasis on how willing the boys were to sell their sexual services to make money. If their only motivation for making money was their need to pay the rent, they could have moved to somewhere cheaper rather than resorting to male prostitution. If they had been made out to be less perfectly straight, less desperate to pay their rent, and more flexible and curious in their sexual practices, the transformation would in my mind have been more believable. On top of that Mark was made out to be not only straight but also this inflexible Alpha, yet he seemed to take to the training as easily as Chris who was supposed to be more naturally submissive.
1/18/26, 12:35 AM
Hello. Thank you again for supporting my first story. It seems like the early feedback for this chapter is less than stellar. I may release an edited version in the near future. Please let me know if this story brings you joy. Feedback is welcome. Depending on the feedback for this chapter I may chose to wrap this series up earlier than anticipated.