Recent Comments

8/4/24, 6:31 AM
I liked the mind control and slave training methods and the uses made of the controlled roommate. I think the reasons i failed to get as much into the story are: 1) the entire story was narrated in a very objective unemotional manner which limited my getting into the emotions and intimate thoughts of the characters and limited the character development; 2) the story was shorter than my personal preference.

8/4/24, 1:22 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thank you for the critique. I’ll try to play around with spicing up my narration in the future.
8/4/24, 12:45 PM
I want to see him getting fucked extremely rough by an alpha black convict and both his boys.
8/3/24, 2:50 PM
Truly epic story telling , also quite erotic

8/4/24, 11:53 AM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thank you sir
hairyartist
8/3/24, 1:50 PM
I love it, thank you!
8/2/24, 10:59 PM
This was very hot and sexy! Jese submitting to Tory is hot! Also I like to imagine the master has a bunch of good boys and will later have some meet. Great story!
Anonymous
8/2/24, 7:49 PM
your stories are the absolute best thing on this website, never stop please!
Dr No
8/2/24, 3:37 PM
Very well done. Great read. I wish there were more hypnotic control and conditioning/change. Perhaps for a follow-up?
8/2/24, 2:24 PM
Amazing. Fantastic storytelling. I’m so hooked on your infrequent chapters telling us more about this wonderfully sexual world of the Parkers that they’ve become a part of my world. You have a great talent and I’m so happy you’ve chosen to share whatever part of it with us here on this site. I look forward to all the great things you will write in the future. I love your style. I’m such a fan.
hairyartist
8/2/24, 12:09 PM
Awesome Jack, Thank You
8/2/24, 9:18 AM
I will never, ever, get tired of reading you.

8/2/24, 12:02 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10022083) Thanks Mutt!