Recent Comments

8/4/24, 3:51 PM
Since it seems to be taking longer than anticipated, any hope of posting the completed 4th chapter before finishing the 5th?
8/4/24, 6:30 AM
This was a DRAFT? Damn!

autoDream
8/4/24, 3:49 PM
@[Buster Red](/user/show/139530) I'm pretty busy, so I usually just sit down, write start to finish, then send it to the world.
Anonymous
8/4/24, 2:30 PM
Damn! Your stories always, ALWAYS take me in: line, hook and sinker. BRAVO!
8/4/24, 6:31 AM
I liked the mind control and slave training methods and the uses made of the controlled roommate. I think the reasons i failed to get as much into the story are: 1) the entire story was narrated in a very objective unemotional manner which limited my getting into the emotions and intimate thoughts of the characters and limited the character development; 2) the story was shorter than my personal preference.

8/4/24, 1:22 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thank you for the critique. I’ll try to play around with spicing up my narration in the future.
8/4/24, 12:45 PM
I want to see him getting fucked extremely rough by an alpha black convict and both his boys.
8/3/24, 2:50 PM
Truly epic story telling , also quite erotic

8/4/24, 11:53 AM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thank you sir
hairyartist
8/3/24, 1:50 PM
I love it, thank you!
8/2/24, 10:59 PM
This was very hot and sexy! Jese submitting to Tory is hot! Also I like to imagine the master has a bunch of good boys and will later have some meet. Great story!
Anonymous
8/2/24, 7:49 PM
your stories are the absolute best thing on this website, never stop please!
Dr No
8/2/24, 3:37 PM
Very well done. Great read. I wish there were more hypnotic control and conditioning/change. Perhaps for a follow-up?