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Royal
9/22/24, 9:36 PM
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9/21/24, 6:52 PM
Oh, I know the system won't waste any assets, even unqualified subjects. If I were designing the system, I'd do the exact same. Scott's thoughts are quite active, indicating he's not in the right state compared to his friend. He never used his code name to refer to himself, this could be proof of he still prioritizing the individual over the collective. However, the system monitors everything! I believe it will continuously improve the program by studying unqualified subjects, gaining insights into human subconsciousness to boost success rates -- such a brilliant measure. From a writing perspective, Scott's view is an excellent perspective that made the story more immersive. I even suspect the entire story is a single simulation session within countless iterations performed by the system (especially consider to Scott's Deja vu), which is constantly evolving. LOL This also reminds me of the anime "Psycho-Pass", which features a "Hive Mind", though unrelated to drones. The narrative parallels this story, even in terms of personality and concept like ARNI, hinting at a possible future for Scott's world. 😉 I feel a bit pity that the journey is temporarily at the end. Thanks for your amazing work! It seems you've entered your own "The Zone' (couldn't resist a pun) while writing, considering the positive propaganda of drone. 😆 Anyway, I love this story in every aspect and am curious about it all. I'll definitely revisit and ponder it often. PS: I have a few inessential questions: 1. Are there always two drones on mission together because the initial connection with the system requires at least two drones? 2. Does the "X" in the code name hold any meaning? The X series drones only increased from Scott's X-88 to Dan's X-98, and we also saw a Y series drone. 3. What is the purpose of the system infiltrating human society? I understand it may be for control, but the story doesn't elaborate much on this, or I missed something, I will read it again when I get time. I'm unsure if this facility belongs to a company, especially with the mention of the Colonel. I apologize for the many questions; I just can't stop thinking about it! Maybe I need to calm down to figure it out on my own.

9/21/24, 10:09 PM
@[BlackMaple](/user/show/180252) You said at the beginning that the System doesn't waste assets. Yes ... that's absolutely correct. I believed that the System uses men to their fullest. It won't waste the body, and it also won't waste the mind. Even if that mind isn't suitable to becoming a drone. In this case, it saves Scott's personality and has him assigned to a defensive simulation scenario. When it said that Scott was going to be "recycled" ... it means that 100% of the human will be repurposed. 1. Are there always two drones? Honestly, that's just my kinky fantasy. It's just a bit hotter when a man is overpowered in numbers. I probably didn't plan that out; it's just my pervy mind. But I would imagine that in its infancy, the System wasn't perfected. So when acquiring men, it would probably use three drones. Then as it became more confident, it saved on resources and sent out two drones when acquiring new recruits. Because we haven't perfected the System, it hasn't yet sent out a single drone. So that indicates that the System isn't quite perfected .... yet. 2. I hate to say it ... but no ... the X designation isn't anything specific. It always just sounds cool. I think I usually use X because of algebra. X usually indicates the unknown variable. 3. This I have no answer to. If I answer that, it usually can't satisfy all the readers. It's always better to leave some things ambiguous. Some things are just hotter and better when you don't have the answers. The truth sometimes can't be better than what our imaginations conjure.

9/22/24, 7:59 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Thanks for the explanation! I'm glad I can discuss this fantasy tory with so many others who share the same kink. Yes! I really like the idea of utilizing both mind and body. The recruit is a valuable asset for the system, and it makes sens even when we consider efficiency. In fact, it's as if the system shows a form of mercy care towards the failed subject. Even if it's not motivated by humanistic care actually, it ultimately saves Scott's mind. In my imagination, the system didn't give up on persuading Scott, when I mentioned that the whole story could be seen as a single-round simulation. That adds a tender feeling to both the story and the system. After all, it's also the system's goal to increase the success of recruiting men, which is a win-win in every sense. 😜 I completely agree with the importance of the blank space you left properly in the story. It makes me appreciate it even more! By filling in those gaps with our own imagination, we have our own best version -- like a "customized" one. Oh, I also like the idea to imply the system's perfection by the number of drones it sends to recruit men. The less drones send to recruit one time, the more efficient the system is. I do like the idea of two drones recruiting one subject, though. IIRC, the drones were "breeding" the subject from both sides, and I must say it's extremely hot. Sorry if I'm being overenthusiastic! I just can't help but share my thoughts about my favorite story. At last, I am also definitely looking forward to no matter where you would take us to in the future. 😈
9/22/24, 5:57 PM
Awesome Story Will there be a part Part 3???
Sep 19, 2024
9/22/24, 3:03 PM
Very clearly AI
9/11/24, 6:48 PM
The sense of immersion in this chapter is really strong!! I started going to the gym this year. Because I haven’t exercised for a long time, my physical fitness was so poor that I almost suffered from hypoxia in the gym. What came to my mind at that time was that I should go to the HOSPITAL , but the coach insisted that I must continue to stay in the GYM, and then did some treatment for me. Of course it’s not such a erotic treatment! But it did help me regain my breathing smoothly and my consciousness gradually became clearer. After that, I fell in love with fitness, and gradually some people said that I became a bit weird, from a nerd who played video games every day to a gym rat. Then someone asked me if I had lost weight, and then one day I was shocked by my own muscle lines in the mirror. I used to work overtime every day, but now I have to report to the gym every day. Work and other things are actually not as important as physical health. Since you are healthy, why not add more muscles? So it seems like I can relate to how Scott feels. I hope that one day I ca be as calm as X-88 and let someone "examine" my changed and strong body. The pathetic friend from the past didn't recognize that he was right in front of him, and he didn't care about the connection to the past, focusing on something more worthy of concentration: becoming a real drone and obeying orders. This plot always turns me on. Usually losing personality and memory excite me, but retaining personality makes me feel more involved in this moment. So Mike was also tested before, probably Scott did it. Hawke was so evil! Having Scott escort Mike to begin his orientation into the Program may also be a test of whether Scott has completed his transformation and can move on to the next level. Or has this actually reached the next level? Whether Mike can successfully join the program is no longer important to Scott, but I guess Mike will succeed. I wonder if Mike will appear in the future?

Anonymous
9/22/24, 7:46 AM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) I've started going to the gym today. . .feels good!
9/20/24, 1:25 PM
You should continue this story about the dark corruption of a holy man. It's a very hot idea.

9/22/24, 4:00 AM
@[Demonicus Satani (Solo)](/user/show/588192) Thank you for your advice. I would love to continue writing - but life is just too complicated. I have been travelling way too much! I love what you write. Darkness and depravity are my thing as well. You inspire me to get back to my writing. Being raped by a pretty Chinese twink is my favourite pastime - especially after a long time eating his ass hole and cock.
9/21/24, 1:27 PM
I must say I really enjoyed this ending. The strange thing is that although I have a vague impression of the previous chapters, this chapter has no impression at all. Maybe I didn’t continue reading when I saw Scott failed, so I’m glad I could revisit the story on GSS and finish it. What Scott thinks is really happening is actually just being calculated in the system grid, but his body still becomes an ARNI. This really brings a sense of déjà vu to The Matrix. I believe that Scott is still destroying the ARNI Program in his world, and even has the opportunity to become a Neo-like character. However, because the system separates qualified personalities from unqualified personalities, even if He is separated from the system grid and has no body to use. The Zone is smarter than The Matrix. Another movie that reminds me of is "Upgraded" (2018). There are also scenarios where a person's consciousness is locked in a simulated situation but the body is used separately. Returning to the story itself, all units will recognize themselves as ARNI personalities even if they are given different appearances by the system, with only different body numbers. In theory, of course Mike can feel this permanent pleasure, but Scott can't, but in fact Scott's body can also feel it. This is actually a prize for everyone, right? But the number of unqualified men accounts for 92%. Will this not cause problems when ARNI sneaks into human society? For example, if it uses Scott's appearance today to approach its former friends and wants to recruit him, but his personality is not that of Scott, wouldn't it be seen through? Even applying only the memories of failures to ARNI does not seem to work, because memory is an essential element in shaping personality, which may cause ARNI to lose control. Having said that, it is easy for ARNI to knock down the targets, so it seems that there is no need to lurk or disguise😓 This is a kink story, and I should simply enjoy the pleasure, but I seem to be a little serious about the details. I hope I didn't offend you, I really enjoy the story. In fact, even as I write these, I still continue leaking, it feels like I am also in The Zone.

9/21/24, 4:51 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) That's exactly right. The sad truth is not all men are fully committed to being a drone. I think (strange as it sounds) the Zone considers the ethically implications of reducing a person's mind and enslaving their body. So to get around this moral dilemma, it rationalizes that Scott's mind is preserved, and he's actually now living the life he "really" wants. His body is technically the drone, while his mind/identity is living in a simulation. I don't think Scott will exist in a hostile let's destroy the System simulation forever. The System just wants a continued analysis of those that resist being turned. Once Scott believes he has won, he probably be placed in other scenarios that ultimately educate the System on further ways in understanding man. The System is always learning and improving. I never really talked about Scott's job. I should've mentioned that he was a lowly employee. He was basically a "drone" at work and had no control over his life. What Scott wants deep down is to take control. So at the beginning, he really wasn't suited for the Program. He was compelled into the program because of his interactions with drones. Meanwhile, Mike (who was Scott's boss) is in control at work. And he secretly yearns to relinquish that control and become a drone. So when you look at the two, you see how each yearns for the other's life. I just think in life we always want what the others have. In the end, both Scott and Mike got what they wanted. It may not seem like it, but this is actually a happy ending.

9/21/24, 7:01 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I didn't realize it's a happy ending, I totally missed the implecation of Scott and Mike. I will pray for all of them, including the system, hope they all will get they want. 😈😈😈

9/22/24, 2:47 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Yes, it’s definitely a good ending! Scott subconsciously feels that the system can make him better and stronger, and at the same time enjoy the physical pleasure that the system brings to him. In the end, he had both, but not in the way he thought. Instead, his consciousness felt that he was powerful enough to destroy everything in the simulation, and his body enjoyed pleasure in reality. On the contrary, when Mike saw his subordinates who often skipped work but became stronger, he did not despise his dereliction of duty but admired his changes. He is the kind of person who can truly enjoy the whole process. I hope to read more of your stories, whether they are new or old, they are sure to be exciting.
9/22/24, 1:01 AM
Man, wish I could go to a carnival like this... not sure which end of things I'd wind up on, though. Ascending to a higher plane via sex sounds pretty rad, though.