Recent Comments

11/21/25, 2:48 PM
Amazing and well written. Thanks for the work!

11/28/25, 2:53 AM
@[BrGuy](/user/show/10033894) Thank you too for reading it. Glad you enjoyed and I hope I can keep you coming back for more.
11/20/25, 8:21 PM
An amazing start! Very creative, very well written! Love it!

11/28/25, 2:52 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Thanks very much. It’s about time I gave something back to your website after all the good times it’s given me.
11/27/25, 7:00 PM
You're a fantastic writer. Cannot wait for this to continue.

11/28/25, 1:53 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Aww man, you’re too kind. I hope the next chapter can deliver.
11/28/25, 12:28 AM
Can't wait for more

11/28/25, 1:50 AM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) More is coming :wink:
11/27/25, 5:26 PM
I'm really enjoying this story and the character of Chris. You kinda want to hate him but then he turns around and does something nice. He seems like a complex character and I do enjoy the fact that he is an unapologetic alpha but also knows how to do aftercare. He's going to help Aaron open up whether Aaron likes it or not. I look forward to the next chapter.

11/28/25, 1:43 AM
@[PSExplorer](/user/show/10064257) That’s great to hear, and it sounds like you and Aaron have that in common. I think we all know someone like Chris; someone who can just get under your skin, even without trying. Really glad you’re enjoying it so far.
11/27/25, 5:55 PM
Holy shit. You weren't kidding about angst incoming!
11/27/25, 7:48 AM
Well, at least Jamie's rather surprising resistance and anger from the last chapter is explained. But ...... I'll wait for the next to see.
11/27/25, 12:50 AM
A good chapter, but not without its flaws. One of them is that it's very strange that Matt Taylor's neighbor doesn't notice, or barely notices, the strange things happening to his neighbor, the one they live with. He should have already guessed it all started with the game. The chapter itself is very well written, and I liked everything else, especially the ending.
11/26/25, 8:48 PM
I hope you're planning to add more to this hot story in the future.
11/26/25, 5:46 PM
Oh man this was awesome! Jamie needs to wake up and save Archie/Dusk from the person he hates most, the person responsible for the league, the head of the tribunal, the author of all of his misery and suffering, an apathetic uncaring monster who built his throne on power intimidation and indifference to suffering

11/26/25, 7:42 PM
@[Stormbound](/user/show/312438) That's my best guess at what happens next, too. Of course, @NeonDemon has a way of confounding all our best guesses. Who knows what will come out of that imagination next?