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Speaks
8/27/24, 7:38 PM
Odd continuity issue. Tom has been out of college 10 years and is 23?

8/27/24, 7:40 PM
@[Speaks](/user/show/964546) That's what happens when I get so excited about finishing it that I post it without proofreading it carefully.
8/27/24, 6:45 PM
Great start!
May 1, 2024
8/27/24, 1:19 PM
Hopefully, someone will continue this, because this is very well written, and there is a lot that could be done to expand on the loose threads.
8/26/24, 9:04 PM
More more more please.

8/27/24, 11:47 AM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Thanks, John! Finishing up my next Paladin story now, but I'm loving the interest in this series, so maybe I should return to this one next, eh? ;)
8/27/24, 7:24 AM
Absolutely brilliant. This is one of the BEST stories I’ve read anywhere in the past year. What wonderful talent and imagination! Bravo!

8/27/24, 11:46 AM
@[Margrave](/user/show/10044380) Hey, thanks - that's really great to hear. Love when a story does the trick! ;) I'm currently finishing up the next Paladin and the Witch book (in Sept, fingers crossed), but your comment reminds me I have another witch, a bad witch, I need to return to! Josiah is so different from my other MCs, so it's a fun headspace to get into.
8/26/24, 5:40 PM
Nice beginning!! Wish the program would also accept skinny guys like me who wanted to be bulked up and perfect.

8/26/24, 6:33 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) I would think that this Facility has different way to induct men into the Program. We're just seeing the weight loss program. I'm sure there's a body building version.

8/26/24, 7:09 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Great to know it!!