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8/31/25, 3:36 PM
I adore this story 🥰

9/1/25, 6:33 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I sent you a forum message. Let me know if you can help.
9/1/25, 2:08 AM
Dude, this story was exceptional! Porny, over-the-top, exaggerated - but all in the _very best way!_ As mentioned above, there was a very conversational, casual style to this story that really suited it well and made it a really easy read, while still being insanely sexy! Everything from the huge dicks, to the "Latino god", to just the casualness of it all was right up my alley! If I could muster any constructive criticism, the only thing I would recommended is maybe giving it a once over and reviewing the grammar and toning that style you've developed - as sometimes I felt my eyes getting lost in the density of some of the paragraphs or action. But please don't be discouraged, I actually can't wait to see what you'll contribute next - keep up the great work! (And thank you Soren, for sending this story to me. You know exactly what I like! :kissing_heart:)
8/31/25, 8:26 PM
This just gets better and better! I’m loving every moment of the story and can’t wait to see what happens next!
8/31/25, 7:06 PM
I'm loving this story so far. Perhaps he accidently makes himself cum or such things :-)
Anonymous
8/31/25, 4:51 PM
Why this chapter is too short, hope the next chapter soon
8/31/25, 3:46 AM
Exactly the ending I was hoping for <3 This was such a great series, thank you!! I'd be curious to see some future vignettes of Josh and Mike 👀
8/30/25, 10:44 PM
Dude! How am I supposed to get anything else done? My tongue's hangin' outta my mouth; the zipper on my shorts is about to burst... And you know damn well that you're turning innocent ol' gym equipment into boner-inducing triggers - sheesh! And Liam, buddy, watch out! Noah knows how to short-circuit your brain and use your body to turn you into one helpless himbo. You could be in big trouble here, stud. Ya hear me? You gotta keep an eye on Noah. He's a trickster. :muscle:
8/30/25, 10:11 PM
Viggo really is one of Hollywood's rising talents! Maybe it's his skill with eliciting just the right performance from his actors? Of course, once the film is released, Jordan Fox may find he no longer dominates every (or any) room he enters. So many new experiences await him!
8/30/25, 9:17 PM
Catching up. This chapter was phenomenal! As always, it feels so real and plausible. Noah and Liam are believable characters and the writing is excellent. On to the next chapter! :muscle:
8/30/25, 2:22 PM
This was hot as fuck. Classic revenge-on-bully story, and I enjoyed the degradation aspects (I actually added that tag even though it doesn’t exist because for Collar it’s very important that it exists lol). I really enjoyed your conversational style in this. It had just the right mix of casual chatter and eloquence. Your writer instincts are a very solid base off which to hone your craft if you so desire (though it already delivered this story very effectively). I’m looking forward to seeing more stories from you. This type of vibe and story is my bread and butter. (As a personal aside, I’m in love with cum and definitely would have enjoyed more, uh, volume. Love unrealistic levels of the stuff, but I’m also crazy, so.)