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Daddyboi
9/3/24, 2:55 PM
Well done for persevering and completing the story. It was fun to see how you gave a twist to a couple developing into a TPE relationship. Never apologise for for the quality of your writing. You had the courage to share it and with practice and feedback it will improve! Now you’ve peeked my interest I’ll be looking out for more stories you write.
Muscle-Flex
9/2/24, 10:26 PM
All caught up with this hot and seductive story! Mark may be having some fun and getting turned on, but I wonder if he thinks he is still ultimately in control - doing this for the monetary pay off while getting his rocks off at the same time. Alphas like a game, especially if they are cocky enough to believe they ultimately control the outcome. Can't wait to see how Mark's oral training plays out and then his trip with Bonerboy to their Master's house!
9/2/24, 8:22 PM
Thanks for sharing this amazing trailer! I noticed a similar scene in "Terminator 4", but unfortunately, it only included partial shots. However, after watching it, I realized I had previously seen a fan-made version by chance that was remade with a more muscular and rubbery look. It really turns me on, and I think you guys wouldn't want to miss it. So, I will include a link to that version -- just click [HERE](https://x.com/gymjunkiemuscle/status/1686096359089176582). Assembly lines and molding machines have always played an important role in my kink, though I never had a clear concept of them. But the elaborated depict of molding machine process in this chapter enriched one of my favorite kinks, and made it come to life. I'm captivated by both your writing skills and the attention to detail you've put into this (even though I'm not a native English speaker). Also, the Deja vu that Scott mentioned really piqued my interest, but I have totally no idea of it yet. Can't wait for the next chapter. Lastly, I have to say I feel tooooo fortunate that you, Rubbrsome, share the exact same kink as I do. Thanks for taking us on a ride through the epic drone world you've created that we all love, as always. FYI, I seem find a typo. "His gut hung far over his waste", does it mean "waist" IIUC?

9/2/24, 9:03 PM
@[BlackMaple](/user/show/180252) You're very welcome. When I first started writing these stories, I was surprised by how many others shared my kinky fantasies. It really felt great to publish these stories, and get a feedback from the reader. In the process, it really felt like a community coming (or should I say 'cumming') together. Sorry for that pun; I just couldn't help myself. But it really motivated me to keep writing more stories throughout the years. Yes ... I totally flubbed that line. I have since corrected it to "waist". Not bad for someone who English isn't their primary language. I've corrected the typo and it's awaiting approval from the site moderators. Thanks for catching that.
9/2/24, 1:11 PM
The biggest problem is having to wait for the next chapter.

9/2/24, 3:42 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I just checked. Chapter 3 will be posted some time on September 4th. From that point on, a new chapter should post every 3 days. And in total, this series has nine chapters. Every chapter has been edited and submitted for GSS for publishing. But yeah ... sorry about the wait. I've never agreed with Netflix's model to release content all at once. This way, it allows readers to read the stories, and hopefully give some kind of comment to the author. I learned that when stories are published all at once, it's hard for the author to gauge whether their stories worked or didn't work.

9/2/24, 4:08 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) No, it's fine... I actually prefer it that way, too. And you're publishing it quickly enough. To publish the whole series all at once would be overwhelming for my dick anyway. So please go on just like this :)
Anonymous
9/2/24, 11:44 AM
I love the slow built suspense of the series. I wonder if “one last chance to pleasure yourself” means there will be some form of chastity in the upcoming chapters. Also really dig the form-fitting and tightness during the measurements… it suggests a type of bondage (only thing missing I think was “shirt stays”. I hope the upcoming chapters goes into a bit more detail with these details. Also hopefully we will hear more about what’s going on in the main characters head as this is happening. Keep up the good work!
9/2/24, 10:15 AM
While I cannot remember much of this story, I instantly remembered the Law of Response. I remember that when writing, sometimes the story just takes on a life of its own. As a writer, you don't really plan out specific details. And when I was writing this chapter, the Law of Response just came out on its own. It was a "holy shit where did that come from" moment. I especially like how each response triggers the next response. And I wondered if I subconsciously got this from Star Wars Episode 1: The Phantom Menace. If you know that film, there's a moment in which Yoda warns a young Anakin Skywalker: "Fear leads to anger. Anger leads to hate. Hate leads to suffering." But in this case, I wanted to take that idea of cause and effect, and turn it into a perpetual-kinky-drone loop. And I've always liked the idea of the human mind being programmed at its most basest level. If you do something acceptable, the mind and body are rewarded. While unacceptable is punished. I just think it's human nature to comply, quickly fall in line and be programmed. Re-reading this chapter definitely hit most of my kinks. I hope it works for you. Oh ... and before I forget ... Chapter 4 will post on September 7th.
9/2/24, 10:04 AM
Well this concludes another story. Just because the previous chapter may have disappointed some readers, I knew I could still end the series on a better note. Obviously Scott didn't join the System as a drone, his mind could still be used to run simulations for potential threats. While he isn't a drone, he is still part of the System. And what's great .. he doesn't even know it. Meanwhile, his body is being used completely separately from his mind. I remember that when I wrote this, I was very happy with the outcome. The Matrix really influenced this ending, of course. Anyways, I hope you readers enjoyed this trip down memory lane. For some of you, this story is completely new. And for others, I hope you still enjoyed it as if reading it for the first time. I certainly did.