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9/16/24, 5:16 AM
Well obviously, Dylan should fuck him a bit, and suggest to Chris that he enjoy it. When he’s ready to shoot, perhaps shoving the dildo back in and cumming in Chris’s mouth (once again being told to enjoy leaning how it feels to be a fag). Since Chris is now shaven like the day he was born, maybe Dylan should diaper him like to too, not to mention a diaper is a good way to keep a leaking dick from making a mess while waiting for John to return. Diaperboys make the best cocksuckers anyway. All they need is a t-shirt and crinkly pampers. Perfect attire while waiting for John to return with a new outfit. And nothing shows off a diaper better than a short cheerleader outfit. Perhaps if Chris is a good boy, maybe then he'll understandhow happy a faggy cocksucker can be. Just saying.

9/17/24, 3:43 PM
@[Luca90069](/user/show/10005501) Hmm.. I'll consider it. I like the idea of Chris walking around in a shirt with no pants but I love the idea of his cock dripping everywhere and making a mess.
Oct 1, 2023
XXX
9/9/24, 5:19 PM
News about your stories? Waiting so hard !! \O^O/

9/17/24, 11:56 AM
@XXX Can't focus on this right now so I might have to release by end of month.
9/17/24, 8:18 AM
This is definitely one of my favorite chapters! The experience of being a powerful drone recruit in the scene with the police officer pushes all the right buttons for me. And the moment all the soldiers transform into their true forms, is peak fantasy for me. Can’t wait for the climax!
9/17/24, 3:06 AM
Wow, this chapter answered almost all my previous questions. And it made me overly excited! Police officer suddenly became a new recruit, recruits gave up their right to become slaves without hesitation, the Colonel The colonel suddenly reveals his true form as a soldier drone. These transitions from high status to low status are always exciting. I also remember the scene where all the citizens on the stage turned into soldiers and the system gave them their identities. This impressed me deeply and may have been one of the inspirations for my fascination with drones. But I thought it was in another story of yours. Apparently I remembered it wrong, and I was even more surprised when I read it.
9/16/24, 11:14 PM
When rediscovering this story, I instantly remembered this chapter. This is probably my favorite. In my opinion, there are several factors that are really working for me here. It all comes down with the encounter between the officer and the recruits. 1. We are usually told to always obey and listen to law enforcement officers. And while the officer does give orders to the two recruits, I love how they are inwardly listening to the System's orders. The officer is completely unaware that these two men are obedient to a higher order. 2. I love the reversal of power in this encounter. At first, the police officer has all the power. He chose to pull their vehicle over under his authority. But within a matter of moments, he loses all authority and it's the lowly recruits that (under the guidance of the System) overpower the officer. No matter how much he tries to regain his authority, he is completely outmatched. 3. The ending cliffhanger. Now that we are nearing the story's conclusion, I remembered that I wanted to really amp up the excitement. We've witnessed Scott lose over and over again during his sparring sessions. And now that we return to them, and with the declaration from Hawk ... I really wanted to let the reader know that this is where we'll find out whether Scott's going to become a drone or not. So yeah ... this is definitely my favorite chapter.
Alex
9/16/24, 3:34 PM
Love it. Its so hot!
9/16/24, 7:39 AM
Relatively simple story line and minimal description, well written and easy to read, but it somehow created a vivid picture of the dungeon, the eager new pups, and the making of another of Daddy's regular boys. There was a definite feeling of power and magic in the air. Typically i prefer forms of domination and control less in the magical or supernatural realm, and more down to earth. In this case though the method didn't matter so much as Daddy's penalties and the emotional reactions of Daddy's victims, and those were palpable.
9/14/24, 7:33 PM
Whoa! "Piggybacking" is absolutely the best! I can't stop feeling "thrilled" just from reading the story. I can't imagine what they are experiencing with "Piggybacking" firsthand. I really hope some technology like this will be developed in the future. :smiling_imp::smiling_imp::smiling_imp: And... How poor Scott is. Even though he is subdued by the system, his sync rate seems apparently lower than his opponent's. Or maybe he threw the match intentionally on purpose? I was also surprised by the direction the story took, but let's see where you want to take us to. Also, "The Zone" remains a mystery. We only know its name and nothing else. Hmm... this must be intentional... I'm soooo curious about it and can't wanittt to see what will happen next!

9/14/24, 7:57 PM
@[BlackMaple](/user/show/180252) Wow! Okay ... both you and Tofu83 are really asking great questions. But I can't answer them because I'm afraid it'll spoil the upcoming chapters. Only after editing this story was I reminded why I chose the title "The Zone". And I also realized that I probably didn't do the best job in tying the title to the story. I do know that when talking to Scott, Hawk mentioned the Zone. But the title definitely plays a big part. So please remind me, once Chapter 9 is posted, the importance of the title. And in that vein, Tofu83 mentioned: "The protagonist’s name remains Scott instead of changing to the recruit’s number X-88. Does it imply that his minds have not been completely reprogrammed and he is still attached to things outside of the program? Does the program want them to keep these?" Again, as with the title, there's a definite reason for this. But I'm afraid that answering this question here would spoil the story. So I'm hoping to be reminded of this question as well. Okay ... YES!!! Piggybacking!!! I always envisioned that it would be the ability for our brain to process multiple perspectives simultaneously. So in a sex scene, you could experience fucking a guy, and at the same time, be the guy that's getting fucked. How awesome would that be?!!! That your brain could process multiple sensory inputs at the same time. And if your brain could process two, could it do three? Four? How many perspectives could one person handle? I found this important because ... when you think about it ... you're basically building towards a hive mind. A man's ability to let go of its "original" identity, and assume or allow another's identity in ... that would be fundamental in having a hive mind ... and in becoming a drone. I think in modern society, we've been indoctrinated to think of me me me. I'm not sure whether it's society, or perhaps just human nature ... but we're just selfish creatures. That's why in the military, during basic training, boot camp is designed to break down a soldier's independent identity, or transition them towards a more team way of thinking. I think it was my intention, when writing this story, that I was trying to do something similar. That recruits have to be broken down, tested and evaluated whether they could become a drone. Piggybacking is definitely a way to test that.

9/15/24, 10:09 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Yeah, the Hive Mind is the essence of drones, and you do a great job of narrating its implementation in various ways. Apparently, you have a lot of thoughts on this, I hope we'll have more opportunities to hear more in the future. I'm also glad to know that I'm not the only one who considers it as an essential aspect. :kissing_heart: My interest in this idea maybe began with playing StarCraft, and I'm sure Star Terk has also reinforced this fascination. "Piggybacking" immediately reminds me of it. StarCraft itself is a good example of this (both Zerg and Protoss, and even Terrans has some kind of concept like this), and the military is always trying to achieve similar effect to enhance the power of soldiers. Even if soldiers can only sense each other, this connection provides a significant boost. Indeed, in a way, the military is on the path to becoming drones, also, this idea is quite natural somehow. Organizations like the military would undoubtedly benefit greatly from it. Just imagine how powerful selfless drone squads could be! I always get excited thinking about this, and that would be a big upgrade for humans.
Anonymous
9/15/24, 7:53 PM
i’ve been trying to find this derek story but i can’t find it anywhere! do you have a link or something?

9/15/24, 8:37 PM
@Anonymous https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/college/jock-buddy/
9/15/24, 8:37 PM
Hey, everyone, thank you so much for the kind words about the story and for supporting me, it really means a lot :) for everyone asking, here is the link for Jock Buddy (apologies, but the author’s name is Derek Philips, not Derek Williams lol), enjoy! https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/college/jock-buddy/