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DMK
9/18/24, 6:36 AM
Very arousing , yeah ! :heart_eyes:
DMK
9/18/24, 5:17 AM
Love it ! 😍
Number 1 Fan
9/17/24, 10:43 PM
The king has returned!!! This is genuinely one of the hottest stories on any erotica site and you continue to top yourself every time (no pun intended hehehe). Been a fan since the tumblr days and im so happy with the transition to longer form stories. You’re one of the only people who completely match my dumb (straight) jock fantasies and have inspired me to want to write with similar concepts. Every chapter gets me rock hard from the jump and i have to edge while reading to keep me from cumming too early. i cannot wait to see the adventures of Theo especially now that it seems he has an ally within the jocks who’s going out of their way to get his jock buddies to get “help” from Theo. Would love to see if maybe Billy could make an appearance somehow to discuss their mutual experiences with Jon and other jocks and to help each other with their respective harems? Maybe other jocks from other schools overhear Theos jocks talking about their experiences and rumors start to spread of a successful method for hung jocks and their constantly rock hard cocks? Just a suggestion but I KNOW you got some fun and horny storylines already in mind. Eagerly anticipating the next chapter!
9/17/24, 7:50 PM
I really enjoy this chapter and the ARNIs change their identity to an unknow soldier is very hot ! I cant wait to see next chapter ! Good work.
boi98229
12/1/22, 9:00 AM
Hi! Yes, there were a few awkward spots where it was apparent English isn't your first language, but don't worry! It was not a problem getting the full meaning and the hot content from your great story! i loved it, and am looking forward to more! What is your first language? Where do you live?

12/1/22, 9:25 AM
@boi98229 Hey thx for the review ^^ french is my first language so from France X) , could you elaborate on the lacking points please ? ^^'

9/16/24, 6:23 AM
@[Domino_](/user/show/10016797) I am so sorry, Domino_, that i failed to respond to your previous note almost two years ago. i read a _LOT_ of stories on this and other sites. i typically much prefer to read stories that are complete. I tend to lose track of the incomplete stories, and sometimes never make it back to read additional chapters the author may have (or just as often have not) written. In this case i did find my way back to your story, but it took me over a year and a half! Given that you have only added one additional chapter, haven't really finished the story, and apparently never spent much time on this site, I doubt that you will even see this message. However if you do see this, and want to write another chapter, I will proofread and edit it for you before you post it. That serves to make the story a little easier to read, but more importantly you may improve your English, and we may get to know each other a little. By the way, I also have a love of domination, control, hypnosis, mind control, transformations, submission, and enslavement. I grew up in Canada so know a little French. I have traveled a little in France and Switzerland (years ago) where i got a little use of my limited French. So we already seem to have some things in common! Hope to chat sometime!

9/17/24, 4:52 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Haha no worry, I'm always hopping between websites too so I get the feeling X) as for the story, I rushed it because I didn't like where it was going and got a bit overwhelmed by studies lol. Thank you for the offer but I don't think I'll write for now, at least as long as I didn't finish my studies. But I take you in on your chat proposition ^^ I wouldn't say no to a few reading recommendations either X)
9/16/24, 5:16 AM
Well obviously, Dylan should fuck him a bit, and suggest to Chris that he enjoy it. When he’s ready to shoot, perhaps shoving the dildo back in and cumming in Chris’s mouth (once again being told to enjoy leaning how it feels to be a fag). Since Chris is now shaven like the day he was born, maybe Dylan should diaper him like to too, not to mention a diaper is a good way to keep a leaking dick from making a mess while waiting for John to return. Diaperboys make the best cocksuckers anyway. All they need is a t-shirt and crinkly pampers. Perfect attire while waiting for John to return with a new outfit. And nothing shows off a diaper better than a short cheerleader outfit. Perhaps if Chris is a good boy, maybe then he'll understandhow happy a faggy cocksucker can be. Just saying.

9/17/24, 3:43 PM
@[Luca90069](/user/show/10005501) Hmm.. I'll consider it. I like the idea of Chris walking around in a shirt with no pants but I love the idea of his cock dripping everywhere and making a mess.
Oct 1, 2023
XXX
9/9/24, 5:19 PM
News about your stories? Waiting so hard !! \O^O/

9/17/24, 11:56 AM
@XXX Can't focus on this right now so I might have to release by end of month.
9/17/24, 8:18 AM
This is definitely one of my favorite chapters! The experience of being a powerful drone recruit in the scene with the police officer pushes all the right buttons for me. And the moment all the soldiers transform into their true forms, is peak fantasy for me. Can’t wait for the climax!
9/17/24, 3:06 AM
Wow, this chapter answered almost all my previous questions. And it made me overly excited! Police officer suddenly became a new recruit, recruits gave up their right to become slaves without hesitation, the Colonel The colonel suddenly reveals his true form as a soldier drone. These transitions from high status to low status are always exciting. I also remember the scene where all the citizens on the stage turned into soldiers and the system gave them their identities. This impressed me deeply and may have been one of the inspirations for my fascination with drones. But I thought it was in another story of yours. Apparently I remembered it wrong, and I was even more surprised when I read it.
9/16/24, 11:14 PM
When rediscovering this story, I instantly remembered this chapter. This is probably my favorite. In my opinion, there are several factors that are really working for me here. It all comes down with the encounter between the officer and the recruits. 1. We are usually told to always obey and listen to law enforcement officers. And while the officer does give orders to the two recruits, I love how they are inwardly listening to the System's orders. The officer is completely unaware that these two men are obedient to a higher order. 2. I love the reversal of power in this encounter. At first, the police officer has all the power. He chose to pull their vehicle over under his authority. But within a matter of moments, he loses all authority and it's the lowly recruits that (under the guidance of the System) overpower the officer. No matter how much he tries to regain his authority, he is completely outmatched. 3. The ending cliffhanger. Now that we are nearing the story's conclusion, I remembered that I wanted to really amp up the excitement. We've witnessed Scott lose over and over again during his sparring sessions. And now that we return to them, and with the declaration from Hawk ... I really wanted to let the reader know that this is where we'll find out whether Scott's going to become a drone or not. So yeah ... this is definitely my favorite chapter.