This last section needs a little editing, but nothing major. The story is so hot—I love it. Long live the Darkness.

I'm genuinely more intrigued now. After all, stories with successful drone transformations are common, and generally speaking the "bad guys" (or drones) win every time. It's nice to see a more successful failure to convert once in a while!

All Hail Satan! Breed, brothers. Fuck now.

AI vibes

Wow, we're nearing the end of the story, and I feel a bit ambivalent. I definitely want to see what happens next, but it makes me a little sad to realize we won't get to explore their world any further. Regarding the plot, I really don't want Scott to harm the system no matter how slight, and it's such a pity that he failed the exam and was rejected. I'm also anxious that the system might not approve of me either. So, I feel not only pity but also a sense of anxiety as I read. I'm curious to learn more about how the system decides to approve or reject someone. It seems to relate to the level of trust people have in the system. In Phase 1, we filtered out those who didn't respond well to the program, possibly because they had no trust in it (or did not respond good to the chemistry). In Phase 2, we placed the subject in a suggestible stat to build reflective training. As for Phase 3, we aimed to make them fully accept the system and open their minds to it. Considering that Scott failed in the last phase, it's reasonable to think his subconscious might still be skeptical. However, he went through the same procedures as all the other subjects and was willing to submit to the system. So, in the end, does that mean he's not suited for the program, just like in Phase 1? Or is it due to his individual specified reactions? :scream: Anyway, thanks for sharing your thoughts while writing this chapter. This perspective is pretty novel and unique; I have totally no idea how you will make this already this hot story even hotter. I can't wait to see the final chapter! I'm so curious to see how you protect the system and perhaps give Scott what he wants. Oh, I almost forgot to mention -- I really enjoyed the power reversal scene. It's exciting to think that the police believe they're following his orders when, in reality, they're obeying the system's directives. This makes me consider the Colonel might experience something similar; he is part of the system. But ARNI itself is an asset of the system, obeying without question and deserving the orgasm it receives. It seems like the Colonel in charge, but ultimately, it's the system calling the shots. This is how a "Hive Mind" operates, how drones operate, and it's so aroused me.:smiling_imp:

Ohh, I love this chapter too! I still remember how impressed I was when I read it for the first time, and I feel the same way every time I re-read it. The process of the police really shows us how efficient and powerful the system is, which makes it even more desirable to me. I can't help but think it's naughty to let rookie recruits tackle such a challenging objective. And yes, the concept of ARNI is brilliant! It opens up the possibility that ARNI drones like this might actually exist somewhere in the world. You're sooooo genius for coming up with this idea. I'd say it's one of the best concepts among your stories in my mind. Not to mention that your ideas are always excellent. I get really excited thinking about how ARNI could be infiltrating everywhere -- maybe even around us right now. This key idea is woven throughout the entire story, which greatly enhances its believability, as if it's a history from the future told by a time traveler. This feels like something may have already been planted in my mind, just waiting for a trigger. I'll be patient and hopeful! LOL Also, the final test reminds me of something called "Psychological Compliance Testing" (not the Milgram experiment). I'm curious if you are inspired by any of those. Let's see how far Scott can go without the help of chemistry!

Truly disappointed that Scott failed the test and tried to rebel. I’m still on the station, watching this loser doing nothing meaningful. May the system force him to surrender in next chapter.

Very arousing , yeah ! :heart_eyes:

Love it ! 😍

The king has returned!!! This is genuinely one of the hottest stories on any erotica site and you continue to top yourself every time (no pun intended hehehe). Been a fan since the tumblr days and im so happy with the transition to longer form stories. You’re one of the only people who completely match my dumb (straight) jock fantasies and have inspired me to want to write with similar concepts. Every chapter gets me rock hard from the jump and i have to edge while reading to keep me from cumming too early. i cannot wait to see the adventures of Theo especially now that it seems he has an ally within the jocks who’s going out of their way to get his jock buddies to get “help” from Theo. Would love to see if maybe Billy could make an appearance somehow to discuss their mutual experiences with Jon and other jocks and to help each other with their respective harems? Maybe other jocks from other schools overhear Theos jocks talking about their experiences and rumors start to spread of a successful method for hung jocks and their constantly rock hard cocks? Just a suggestion but I KNOW you got some fun and horny storylines already in mind. Eagerly anticipating the next chapter!