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Sep 20, 2024
9/21/24, 4:06 AM
Finally had my first maxed out event earlier this month (got all the guys (all hotties, IMO) and other rewards). Here's to hoping I can repeat that feat more and more frequently! GH ID 1292865
Sep 19, 2024
9/20/24, 9:30 PM
I wanted Scott to pass. I was envious of Mike when he joined. I was getting goosebumps when I saw how he stiffened up, his eyes becoming white, a mirror of his empty mind, and mechanical fucking his only purpose... But it wasn't to be. Shame...
Sep 19, 2024
9/20/24, 9:26 PM
umarım yeni hikayeler yakıında gelir
Sep 19, 2024
9/20/24, 11:21 AM
Not going to lie I appreciate the 3-5 letter hint that Scott was never going to pass this test. After all, if he was truly going to submit fully to the system, wouldn’t he have started thinking of himself as X-88 at some point?
9/20/24, 8:34 PM
@[Nodara](/user/show/970256) For me, one major clue that Scott's going to fail lies in the title of this series: "The Zone". We've all heard about "the zone" in regards to sports or athletes. When an athlete gets in "the zone" ... they just sorta lose themselves in the activity. They act on pure instinct, and can't seem to do any wrong or make any error. If you go back and reread what Scott's doing during this test, you can tell that he's definitely not in "the zone". Simply put: he's thinking way too hard. He's trying to be analytical when approaching his opponent. He really needed to just let himself go, and just blindly attack. If he were to follow orders, he just wouldn't hesitate. He would just act without thought. When I think of a drone, I think of a person that just blindly follows orders and doesn't question or even put much thought into what they're doing. A good comparison to a drone is a zombie. Does a zombie stop and think about how to defeat their opponent? So Scott was just thinking way too hard. I'm not positive (even though I'm the writer) ... but if I were to guess, Scott needed to just attack attack attack. He needed to lose himself in the activity. If he just kept at it, and not stopping or hesitating, then his opponent drone would've ascertained that the recruit was following the orders given. He would have analyzed the recruits breathing, heartbeat, and vitals ... trying to determine whether the recruit was physically and mentally in "the zone". At that point, if the recruit had demonstrated that it was following orders, the drone opponent would've just simply allowed the recruit to fuck him. If you think about it, the drone cannot be defeated. The drones are perfect. It has to be willing to let the recruit fuck it.
Jan 25, 2022
Anonymous
9/20/24, 3:50 PM
That’s crazy, the doctor should lose his license. Over medicating a patient is not funny. And he did it twice.
Oct 31, 2023
9/20/24, 7:35 AM
This last section needs a little editing, but nothing major. The story is so hot—I love it. Long live the Darkness.
Sep 19, 2024
9/20/24, 6:57 AM
I'm genuinely more intrigued now. After all, stories with successful drone transformations are common, and generally speaking the "bad guys" (or drones) win every time. It's nice to see a more successful failure to convert once in a while!
Oct 22, 2023
9/20/24, 6:17 AM
All Hail Satan! Breed, brothers. Fuck now.
Sep 19, 2024
Anonymous
9/20/24, 3:30 AM
AI vibes
Sep 19, 2024
9/19/24, 8:49 PM
Wow, we're nearing the end of the story, and I feel a bit ambivalent. I definitely want to see what happens next, but it makes me a little sad to realize we won't get to explore their world any further. Regarding the plot, I really don't want Scott to harm the system no matter how slight, and it's such a pity that he failed the exam and was rejected. I'm also anxious that the system might not approve of me either. So, I feel not only pity but also a sense of anxiety as I read. I'm curious to learn more about how the system decides to approve or reject someone. It seems to relate to the level of trust people have in the system. In Phase 1, we filtered out those who didn't respond well to the program, possibly because they had no trust in it (or did not respond good to the chemistry). In Phase 2, we placed the subject in a suggestible stat to build reflective training. As for Phase 3, we aimed to make them fully accept the system and open their minds to it. Considering that Scott failed in the last phase, it's reasonable to think his subconscious might still be skeptical. However, he went through the same procedures as all the other subjects and was willing to submit to the system. So, in the end, does that mean he's not suited for the program, just like in Phase 1? Or is it due to his individual specified reactions? :scream: Anyway, thanks for sharing your thoughts while writing this chapter. This perspective is pretty novel and unique; I have totally no idea how you will make this already this hot story even hotter. I can't wait to see the final chapter! I'm so curious to see how you protect the system and perhaps give Scott what he wants. Oh, I almost forgot to mention -- I really enjoyed the power reversal scene. It's exciting to think that the police believe they're following his orders when, in reality, they're obeying the system's directives. This makes me consider the Colonel might experience something similar; he is part of the system. But ARNI itself is an asset of the system, obeying without question and deserving the orgasm it receives. It seems like the Colonel in charge, but ultimately, it's the system calling the shots. This is how a "Hive Mind" operates, how drones operate, and it's so aroused me.:smiling_imp: