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nobody
9/21/24, 11:48 PM
Hello, GH ID 22226
Anonymous
9/21/24, 2:26 PM
Gonna have to demand that you write another chapter dude :-D
Sep 19, 2024
9/20/24, 9:31 PM
Definitely AI written. :-1:

9/21/24, 5:20 AM
@[foobar88](/user/show/1175145) In total agreement, could tell within a few words was AI written
9/21/24, 4:06 AM
Finally had my first maxed out event earlier this month (got all the guys (all hotties, IMO) and other rewards). Here's to hoping I can repeat that feat more and more frequently! GH ID 1292865
9/20/24, 9:30 PM
I wanted Scott to pass. I was envious of Mike when he joined. I was getting goosebumps when I saw how he stiffened up, his eyes becoming white, a mirror of his empty mind, and mechanical fucking his only purpose... But it wasn't to be. Shame...
9/20/24, 9:26 PM
umarım yeni hikayeler yakıında gelir
9/20/24, 11:21 AM
Not going to lie I appreciate the 3-5 letter hint that Scott was never going to pass this test. After all, if he was truly going to submit fully to the system, wouldn’t he have started thinking of himself as X-88 at some point?

9/20/24, 8:34 PM
@[Nodara](/user/show/970256) For me, one major clue that Scott's going to fail lies in the title of this series: "The Zone". We've all heard about "the zone" in regards to sports or athletes. When an athlete gets in "the zone" ... they just sorta lose themselves in the activity. They act on pure instinct, and can't seem to do any wrong or make any error. If you go back and reread what Scott's doing during this test, you can tell that he's definitely not in "the zone". Simply put: he's thinking way too hard. He's trying to be analytical when approaching his opponent. He really needed to just let himself go, and just blindly attack. If he were to follow orders, he just wouldn't hesitate. He would just act without thought. When I think of a drone, I think of a person that just blindly follows orders and doesn't question or even put much thought into what they're doing. A good comparison to a drone is a zombie. Does a zombie stop and think about how to defeat their opponent? So Scott was just thinking way too hard. I'm not positive (even though I'm the writer) ... but if I were to guess, Scott needed to just attack attack attack. He needed to lose himself in the activity. If he just kept at it, and not stopping or hesitating, then his opponent drone would've ascertained that the recruit was following the orders given. He would have analyzed the recruits breathing, heartbeat, and vitals ... trying to determine whether the recruit was physically and mentally in "the zone". At that point, if the recruit had demonstrated that it was following orders, the drone opponent would've just simply allowed the recruit to fuck him. If you think about it, the drone cannot be defeated. The drones are perfect. It has to be willing to let the recruit fuck it.
Anonymous
9/20/24, 3:50 PM
That’s crazy, the doctor should lose his license. Over medicating a patient is not funny. And he did it twice.
9/20/24, 7:35 AM
This last section needs a little editing, but nothing major. The story is so hot—I love it. Long live the Darkness.
9/20/24, 6:57 AM
I'm genuinely more intrigued now. After all, stories with successful drone transformations are common, and generally speaking the "bad guys" (or drones) win every time. It's nice to see a more successful failure to convert once in a while!