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9/20/24, 1:25 PM
You should continue this story about the dark corruption of a holy man. It's a very hot idea.

9/22/24, 4:00 AM
@[Demonicus Satani (Solo)](/user/show/588192) Thank you for your advice. I would love to continue writing - but life is just too complicated. I have been travelling way too much! I love what you write. Darkness and depravity are my thing as well. You inspire me to get back to my writing. Being raped by a pretty Chinese twink is my favourite pastime - especially after a long time eating his ass hole and cock.
9/21/24, 1:27 PM
I must say I really enjoyed this ending. The strange thing is that although I have a vague impression of the previous chapters, this chapter has no impression at all. Maybe I didn’t continue reading when I saw Scott failed, so I’m glad I could revisit the story on GSS and finish it. What Scott thinks is really happening is actually just being calculated in the system grid, but his body still becomes an ARNI. This really brings a sense of déjà vu to The Matrix. I believe that Scott is still destroying the ARNI Program in his world, and even has the opportunity to become a Neo-like character. However, because the system separates qualified personalities from unqualified personalities, even if He is separated from the system grid and has no body to use. The Zone is smarter than The Matrix. Another movie that reminds me of is "Upgraded" (2018). There are also scenarios where a person's consciousness is locked in a simulated situation but the body is used separately. Returning to the story itself, all units will recognize themselves as ARNI personalities even if they are given different appearances by the system, with only different body numbers. In theory, of course Mike can feel this permanent pleasure, but Scott can't, but in fact Scott's body can also feel it. This is actually a prize for everyone, right? But the number of unqualified men accounts for 92%. Will this not cause problems when ARNI sneaks into human society? For example, if it uses Scott's appearance today to approach its former friends and wants to recruit him, but his personality is not that of Scott, wouldn't it be seen through? Even applying only the memories of failures to ARNI does not seem to work, because memory is an essential element in shaping personality, which may cause ARNI to lose control. Having said that, it is easy for ARNI to knock down the targets, so it seems that there is no need to lurk or disguise😓 This is a kink story, and I should simply enjoy the pleasure, but I seem to be a little serious about the details. I hope I didn't offend you, I really enjoy the story. In fact, even as I write these, I still continue leaking, it feels like I am also in The Zone.

9/21/24, 4:51 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) That's exactly right. The sad truth is not all men are fully committed to being a drone. I think (strange as it sounds) the Zone considers the ethically implications of reducing a person's mind and enslaving their body. So to get around this moral dilemma, it rationalizes that Scott's mind is preserved, and he's actually now living the life he "really" wants. His body is technically the drone, while his mind/identity is living in a simulation. I don't think Scott will exist in a hostile let's destroy the System simulation forever. The System just wants a continued analysis of those that resist being turned. Once Scott believes he has won, he probably be placed in other scenarios that ultimately educate the System on further ways in understanding man. The System is always learning and improving. I never really talked about Scott's job. I should've mentioned that he was a lowly employee. He was basically a "drone" at work and had no control over his life. What Scott wants deep down is to take control. So at the beginning, he really wasn't suited for the Program. He was compelled into the program because of his interactions with drones. Meanwhile, Mike (who was Scott's boss) is in control at work. And he secretly yearns to relinquish that control and become a drone. So when you look at the two, you see how each yearns for the other's life. I just think in life we always want what the others have. In the end, both Scott and Mike got what they wanted. It may not seem like it, but this is actually a happy ending.

9/21/24, 7:01 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I didn't realize it's a happy ending, I totally missed the implecation of Scott and Mike. I will pray for all of them, including the system, hope they all will get they want. 😈😈😈

9/22/24, 2:47 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Yes, it’s definitely a good ending! Scott subconsciously feels that the system can make him better and stronger, and at the same time enjoy the physical pleasure that the system brings to him. In the end, he had both, but not in the way he thought. Instead, his consciousness felt that he was powerful enough to destroy everything in the simulation, and his body enjoyed pleasure in reality. On the contrary, when Mike saw his subordinates who often skipped work but became stronger, he did not despise his dereliction of duty but admired his changes. He is the kind of person who can truly enjoy the whole process. I hope to read more of your stories, whether they are new or old, they are sure to be exciting.
9/22/24, 1:01 AM
Man, wish I could go to a carnival like this... not sure which end of things I'd wind up on, though. Ascending to a higher plane via sex sounds pretty rad, though.
nobody
9/21/24, 11:48 PM
Hello, GH ID 22226
Anonymous
9/21/24, 2:26 PM
Gonna have to demand that you write another chapter dude :-D
Sep 19, 2024
9/20/24, 9:31 PM
Definitely AI written. :-1:

9/21/24, 5:20 AM
@[foobar88](/user/show/1175145) In total agreement, could tell within a few words was AI written
9/21/24, 4:06 AM
Finally had my first maxed out event earlier this month (got all the guys (all hotties, IMO) and other rewards). Here's to hoping I can repeat that feat more and more frequently! GH ID 1292865
9/20/24, 9:30 PM
I wanted Scott to pass. I was envious of Mike when he joined. I was getting goosebumps when I saw how he stiffened up, his eyes becoming white, a mirror of his empty mind, and mechanical fucking his only purpose... But it wasn't to be. Shame...
9/20/24, 9:26 PM
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9/20/24, 11:21 AM
Not going to lie I appreciate the 3-5 letter hint that Scott was never going to pass this test. After all, if he was truly going to submit fully to the system, wouldn’t he have started thinking of himself as X-88 at some point?

9/20/24, 8:34 PM
@[Nodara](/user/show/970256) For me, one major clue that Scott's going to fail lies in the title of this series: "The Zone". We've all heard about "the zone" in regards to sports or athletes. When an athlete gets in "the zone" ... they just sorta lose themselves in the activity. They act on pure instinct, and can't seem to do any wrong or make any error. If you go back and reread what Scott's doing during this test, you can tell that he's definitely not in "the zone". Simply put: he's thinking way too hard. He's trying to be analytical when approaching his opponent. He really needed to just let himself go, and just blindly attack. If he were to follow orders, he just wouldn't hesitate. He would just act without thought. When I think of a drone, I think of a person that just blindly follows orders and doesn't question or even put much thought into what they're doing. A good comparison to a drone is a zombie. Does a zombie stop and think about how to defeat their opponent? So Scott was just thinking way too hard. I'm not positive (even though I'm the writer) ... but if I were to guess, Scott needed to just attack attack attack. He needed to lose himself in the activity. If he just kept at it, and not stopping or hesitating, then his opponent drone would've ascertained that the recruit was following the orders given. He would have analyzed the recruits breathing, heartbeat, and vitals ... trying to determine whether the recruit was physically and mentally in "the zone". At that point, if the recruit had demonstrated that it was following orders, the drone opponent would've just simply allowed the recruit to fuck him. If you think about it, the drone cannot be defeated. The drones are perfect. It has to be willing to let the recruit fuck it.