Great start, this feels like a long one. Those hypnotapes must have done a heck of a number of Noah's baby brain. Poor guy his situation stinks. His Papa must be mortified, wonder what he's thinking this whole time. Those TSA agents sure do seem curious, don't they? Wonder how messy this situation can get. 😈

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Easy and pleasant story to read. I liked everything, I hope there will be a continuation of the story) I would like to see how the very first men's night between Fernando, Jeff and Paul happened for the prologue of the story. And it would also be interesting to see the story from a third person For example, from a younger brother or another family member (who specifically followed his father or brother) to find out what happens on this Men's Night) I would like to read the story from a voyeuristic point of view

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Oh, I know the system won't waste any assets, even unqualified subjects. If I were designing the system, I'd do the exact same. Scott's thoughts are quite active, indicating he's not in the right state compared to his friend. He never used his code name to refer to himself, this could be proof of he still prioritizing the individual over the collective. However, the system monitors everything! I believe it will continuously improve the program by studying unqualified subjects, gaining insights into human subconsciousness to boost success rates -- such a brilliant measure. From a writing perspective, Scott's view is an excellent perspective that made the story more immersive. I even suspect the entire story is a single simulation session within countless iterations performed by the system (especially consider to Scott's Deja vu), which is constantly evolving. LOL This also reminds me of the anime "Psycho-Pass", which features a "Hive Mind", though unrelated to drones. The narrative parallels this story, even in terms of personality and concept like ARNI, hinting at a possible future for Scott's world. 😉 I feel a bit pity that the journey is temporarily at the end. Thanks for your amazing work! It seems you've entered your own "The Zone' (couldn't resist a pun) while writing, considering the positive propaganda of drone. 😆 Anyway, I love this story in every aspect and am curious about it all. I'll definitely revisit and ponder it often. PS: I have a few inessential questions: 1. Are there always two drones on mission together because the initial connection with the system requires at least two drones? 2. Does the "X" in the code name hold any meaning? The X series drones only increased from Scott's X-88 to Dan's X-98, and we also saw a Y series drone. 3. What is the purpose of the system infiltrating human society? I understand it may be for control, but the story doesn't elaborate much on this, or I missed something, I will read it again when I get time. I'm unsure if this facility belongs to a company, especially with the mention of the Colonel. I apologize for the many questions; I just can't stop thinking about it! Maybe I need to calm down to figure it out on my own.

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Awesome Story Will there be a part Part 3???

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Very clearly AI

The sense of immersion in this chapter is really strong!! I started going to the gym this year. Because I haven’t exercised for a long time, my physical fitness was so poor that I almost suffered from hypoxia in the gym. What came to my mind at that time was that I should go to the HOSPITAL , but the coach insisted that I must continue to stay in the GYM, and then did some treatment for me. Of course it’s not such a erotic treatment! But it did help me regain my breathing smoothly and my consciousness gradually became clearer. After that, I fell in love with fitness, and gradually some people said that I became a bit weird, from a nerd who played video games every day to a gym rat. Then someone asked me if I had lost weight, and then one day I was shocked by my own muscle lines in the mirror. I used to work overtime every day, but now I have to report to the gym every day. Work and other things are actually not as important as physical health. Since you are healthy, why not add more muscles? So it seems like I can relate to how Scott feels. I hope that one day I ca be as calm as X-88 and let someone "examine" my changed and strong body. The pathetic friend from the past didn't recognize that he was right in front of him, and he didn't care about the connection to the past, focusing on something more worthy of concentration: becoming a real drone and obeying orders. This plot always turns me on. Usually losing personality and memory excite me, but retaining personality makes me feel more involved in this moment. So Mike was also tested before, probably Scott did it. Hawke was so evil! Having Scott escort Mike to begin his orientation into the Program may also be a test of whether Scott has completed his transformation and can move on to the next level. Or has this actually reached the next level? Whether Mike can successfully join the program is no longer important to Scott, but I guess Mike will succeed. I wonder if Mike will appear in the future?