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LthrFog
10/7/24, 5:13 AM
Great writing — could never tell English isn't your first language — with even better imagery. The description of the vampire's fog coalescing like a cocoon with something growing & taking shape inside hit the nail on the head. Kudos! And please keep it up.

10/7/24, 2:34 PM
@LthrFog Thank you! I have a few more ideas in mind, we'll see how they turn out!
10/7/24, 10:48 AM
I absolutely love a good story about vampires, wish there were more like this around here! It was very well written and it was really fun to read (you know what kind of fun😈) but I would have loved to read more about the transformation and post-transformation as they are what I enjoy the most. Nevertheless, I loved the story and it's definitely going to my favourite story list. Keep going!

10/7/24, 2:32 PM
@[SmokingVampire](/user/show/10001507) Very much appreciated! I've already read a couple vampire stories on this site that I thought were excellent, but it's still not enough in my opinion, hah. As for your criticism, I'll agree that I enjoy a nice, descriptive transformation scene, and I even considered expanding on the final scene with our protagonist turned, but I felt that they didn't mesh too well with the rest of the story. I'll definitely keep it in mind for future projects though, so thanks, and happy to see another vamp fan around these parts!
10/6/24, 4:20 PM
Hi, and thanks for reading this story. I hope you enjoyed it! This is the first one I've decided to publish, and also English isn't my first language, so it'll probably be a bit messy. First time posting on this site as well, so apologies if things aren't tagged properly -- feel free to make any corrections if needed, and I'll be happy to hear any feedback.

10/7/24, 12:25 AM
@[MonsterfuckerAnonymous](/user/show/10055289) This is very well written. Scary and sexy! You are talented and should continue to contribute! Great addition to the site!

10/7/24, 2:17 PM
@[Mrdick](/user/show/1001656) Thank you! I have a handful of other short stories I haven't published, might polish them up so I can post them here!
Jul 19, 2024
10/7/24, 4:03 AM
And he paid off the cops to set up his own brother.
Jul 19, 2024
10/7/24, 3:55 AM
What did his brother,or past family do to him. That he would make his brother a slave forever.
10/2/24, 5:28 PM
Excited to see where this goes!

10/7/24, 12:56 AM
@[Nick Rivers](/user/show/10014837) Chapter 2 should be published by 10/8/24
10/2/24, 7:06 AM
Great start, looking forward to seeing where it goes

10/7/24, 12:56 AM
@[LeatherFreak](/user/show/104732) It will go down a deep, dark hole.
Server of men
10/1/24, 6:44 AM
Very interesting. Can't wait to read the next part.

10/7/24, 12:55 AM
@Server of men Chapter 2 is coming!
nycboot
10/1/24, 1:37 AM
Intriguing start.

10/7/24, 12:54 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) Thanks! More to come..
10/7/24, 12:37 AM
Love it, SIR!