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10/9/24, 5:07 AM
You have me wanting to rwad the next several stories
10/9/24, 2:35 AM
Love being forced to wear a suit or at least a shirt and tie to sleep. That's such a hot night uniform.

10/9/24, 3:02 AM
@[SuitAndTieLover](/user/show/1478878) Yes indeed!
Anonymous
10/8/24, 12:58 PM
great job - so much advancement from the previous chapters

10/9/24, 12:36 AM
@Anonymous Thank you! Yes there will be more to come!
Anonymous
10/8/24, 8:28 PM
Superb story. Would have loved a few more physical descriptions (body type, hair styles, piercing locations) but outside of that this was near perfect. Hoping the series continues :)

10/8/24, 8:41 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! This was intended as a one-shot, but I'll keep those in mind if I decide to make some kind of continuation. Glad you enjoyed it!
Anonymous
10/8/24, 5:23 AM
Any hope of a continuation?
10/8/24, 12:56 AM
Such a great story, can not wait for the next chapter.

10/8/24, 2:47 AM
@[TUMBRELLA08](/user/show/10046127) Thank you!
10/7/24, 7:10 PM
The setting has moved from the campground to their nest, which is an unexpected transition! I'm looking forward to seeing how Ian's kingdom will operate with the other victims.
10/6/24, 9:26 PM
I loved it

10/7/24, 2:36 PM
@[Phil427636](/user/show/915077) Thanks!
LthrFog
10/7/24, 5:13 AM
Great writing — could never tell English isn't your first language — with even better imagery. The description of the vampire's fog coalescing like a cocoon with something growing & taking shape inside hit the nail on the head. Kudos! And please keep it up.

10/7/24, 2:34 PM
@LthrFog Thank you! I have a few more ideas in mind, we'll see how they turn out!
10/7/24, 10:48 AM
I absolutely love a good story about vampires, wish there were more like this around here! It was very well written and it was really fun to read (you know what kind of fun😈) but I would have loved to read more about the transformation and post-transformation as they are what I enjoy the most. Nevertheless, I loved the story and it's definitely going to my favourite story list. Keep going!

10/7/24, 2:32 PM
@[SmokingVampire](/user/show/10001507) Very much appreciated! I've already read a couple vampire stories on this site that I thought were excellent, but it's still not enough in my opinion, hah. As for your criticism, I'll agree that I enjoy a nice, descriptive transformation scene, and I even considered expanding on the final scene with our protagonist turned, but I felt that they didn't mesh too well with the rest of the story. I'll definitely keep it in mind for future projects though, so thanks, and happy to see another vamp fan around these parts!