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12/18/24, 4:34 PM
Yes , it is great work. Have you written any new chapters to this? Would love to see if Chris and or Bill woke up. And what about his boss checking in on hism with his new pants.
12/17/24, 7:36 PM
Really good story. Like commenter above said - wouldn't mind more to come about the altered Nick.
12/17/24, 3:49 PM
Love this. Cannot wait for more!
12/17/24, 2:36 PM
WHOA.. that was wild. good storytelling
12/17/24, 2:21 PM
ANOTHER great story with the setting being this wonderful gym. I love the references to the armpit and licking ... i love smells and it pulls me deeper into the story. THANK YOU
12/15/24, 4:23 PM
Incredibly hot story. I love how much he wants to give in. It’s relatable

12/16/24, 5:34 PM
@[TheWalkingAlive](/user/show/925088) Glad you enjoyed it, and love the profile pic ;)

12/17/24, 6:34 AM
@[autoDream](/user/show/20698) Thanks! It’s a selfie in case you were wondering :relaxed:
Anonymous
12/16/24, 5:34 PM
Is this story going to continue?

Anonymous
12/17/24, 1:48 AM
@Anonymous Hey, thanks for reading - yes, definitely will continue! Sorry for the wait. Amazon ended Vella so I switched gears to wrap up my Two Broke Arms story. Two new episodes there and am finishing up final chapter for book release.
12/15/24, 7:15 PM
Love all your stories

12/16/24, 5:59 PM
@[Princeazrael](/user/show/1082586) <3
12/15/24, 6:29 PM
Very cute and sexy. I like the potential. Too bad we didn't get any Uncle pov. Also too bad the dad didn't get hypnoed for fun too. But yeah fun and sexy. Good story!

12/16/24, 5:59 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Yeah, I think because I put myself into Jese's position, it wasn't something I wanted to get too deep into. I toyed around with the idea of him being hypnotized and actually finding Jese in the uncle's bedroom, but a suggestion made it so he saw just some random twink, and not his son. So he would apologize and leave after a few more words from the uncle. Jese, at first would think his life was over, but in the end it would just be a Master flex by the uncle to show "awake" Jese just how real hypnosis was. No way his dad would just see him naked there, and now go crazy otherwise.
12/16/24, 11:31 AM
An amazing hypnosis story. One of the best actually. I agree with StageShowMM, it's borderline uncomfortable, but that makes it so hot. Also that you leave so much to the readers imagination. Usually, I love juicy things described in detail, but in this case it just works like this!