Recent Comments

4/2/25, 2:52 PM
I just recently reread this entire series and picked up a ton of details I’d either forgotten or missed from the first time. Reading the whole series in a couple of days instead of reading it a chapter at a time spaced a few weeks apart was a big difference. What a great series about Eden. So many questions about many different characters answered and some of the best writing in this genre I’ve ever read. I wonder and dream (with a hard cock and heart full of hope) about Archie King and what his specific training would be like at Eden as well as Eli. Oh God please! I discovered you years ago on breeding zone and followed you here and so glad I did. You feed my filthy mind a good fucking on a regular basis and I thank you.

4/3/25, 4:51 AM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) On my Telegram channel there is the story of what Archie and Gray are doing and a new version of Parker Brothers that adds a lot to the story.
Poggie
4/3/25, 2:02 AM
I'm really excited to see what comes next! It's best AWESOME so far!
4/2/25, 11:39 PM
Don't know if you plan to do more of these but they're so hot! Would love more!
4/2/25, 7:41 PM
I have a feeling that I have read this story before. Have you ever post this anywhere else? I seems familiar.

4/2/25, 8:42 PM
@[Yongyuthx](/user/show/72133) This story seems based off of "Domination of a Quarterback" by Jonathan Longhorn

4/2/25, 9:39 PM
@[Larry](/user/show/494946) That's why it seems familiar. I've read that story. I hope this is not just the AI paraphrase with the change of character 😭
Jess
4/2/25, 12:56 AM
I read and then re-read this series twice. Genius, pure genius.
4/1/25, 11:48 PM
I've thoroughly enjoyed this one. Excited for the conclusion!
4/1/25, 9:54 PM
So great!!!!
4/1/25, 8:06 PM
I really needed Austin to start his journey thus is great! Please continue soon!
8/30/24, 9:03 AM
I’m enjoying this series. But would you be open to a proofreader? There are many errors that detract from the story.

8/31/24, 6:30 PM
@[KinkyNickInSea](/user/show/17305) Sorry I’m dyslexic so I cant always see the errors even if I re-read it twenty times 😂 as to your question, I’ll think about it.

9/19/24, 7:40 AM
@[Caged_Writer_Boi](/user/show/10050218) I enjoyed the story and usually am pretty aware of errors. In this case I don't recall any, so i guess i can fairly say i didn't find them distracting at all. Perhaps my imagination was flying too high. Thanks for the story!

9/22/24, 9:58 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'll be revisiting this story soon with a new chapter.

4/1/25, 4:50 PM
@[Caged_Writer_Boi](/user/show/10050218) You and i have very similar submissive kinks. i absolutely loved 'Almost Perfect', which is now one of my absolute favorite stories, and my motivation for taking the time to create my first Curated List. Service is my pleasure, so if you should choose to use a proof-reader as suggested above, i would be happy to be of service to such a wonderful writer. (Personally i loved the story so much i read so fast to get the meaning that i didn't care what minor errors there might have been.)