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10/26/25, 2:08 PM
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10/26/25, 1:26 PM
I enjoy how Ivan is accepting this more and more. And now reading that Jake is caged just adds to that. Though i wonder if the coaches will get too greedy and this all falls apart? Also, since this story is closely mirrored to Brody's Fall, I wonder if rubber will be introduced? Maybe not a full suit like that story, but maybe as underwear and swimwear, or even a singlet?
Anonymous
10/26/25, 12:37 PM
Yeah this is being WAY too morbid for me. I used to get off on reading the first few chapters and even put it in my favorite list but Ivan's humiliation is DRAGGING on and on. And I guess he's just a dumb jock because he really can NOT find a way to get out -- which to me is unbelievable. I'm out.
10/26/25, 12:15 PM
omg i love that. pls the new chapter ๐Ÿ”ฅ
Steve89
10/25/25, 4:07 PM
Woah too many haters here! The slow burn is the best part, keep up the great work man.

10/25/25, 5:36 PM
@Steve89 brooo fr lmao comes with the territory i guess good lookin out tho โ€” real one

Anonymous
10/26/25, 8:59 AM
@[lucas pucci](/user/show/10040865) Keep doing gods work my man, the majority of us really appreciate the effort thatโ€™s going in
10/25/25, 11:38 PM
I just KNOW that the author is either an actual senator or this is a story commissioned by a senator lmao
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10/25/25, 9:57 AM
Are the rest of these chapters going to remain patreon exclusives or will you post them here eventually?

10/25/25, 12:59 PM
@โ˜† these are Patreon exclusives for now, so they wonโ€™t be posted hereโ€ฆ
10/25/25, 6:41 AM
I rarely comment, but I thought I'd at least show my support for this series. It's so wholesome and I'm always looking forward to the next chapter.
HypnoMutt-1
10/23/25, 11:23 PM
What a ride!! Brilliant ๐Ÿซก๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜Ž awoo!

10/24/25, 8:10 PM
@[HypnoMutt-1](/user/show/10023035) I could see this as one of the comments on Alex's livestream. :smile:
10/24/25, 5:14 PM
Just finished the series. I loved the ending! I also just finished reading the comments, which was a completely different saga. @LockedPig, I'm sorry you had to go through this. I don't feel comfortable uploading my CV here, but I have extensive training and experience in the mental health field. These comments were harassment. If you are still feeling side-effects, such as ruminating thoughts or strong negative feelings, please reach out to a professional for help in processing your emotions and this experience. Know that there are people on this site and in your life who want the best for you.