Recent Comments

MrBig
10/21/24, 11:44 AM
The only thing that's missing is Rick getting horny and dogs get horny all year round so I can only imagine how he would act ;)

Hypno-boy
10/23/24, 11:35 AM
@MrBig I'm sure there'd be a lot of humping involved. And whatever Rick would do.
Anonymous
10/21/24, 5:35 AM
I love it. Probably one of my favorite concepts so far. Hypnotizing an uptight manly dad to become your house pet is such a fun concept.

Hypno-boy
10/23/24, 11:35 AM
@Anonymous same
10/20/24, 7:19 PM
I feel like there is a while segment missing? About the second time Rick is hypnotized and given (*I presume*) a trigger to go under as soon as his son uses his name? Otherwise, fun story.

Hypno-boy
10/23/24, 11:34 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) I think the implication was meant to be that the other hypnotist had already done this, but I can see how it would cause confusion. I'll adjust the story a bit.
10/23/24, 2:35 AM
Taylor needs to go down hard. I don't even mean a hard cock. He deserves to only watch John get it and give it and not be allowed to play. Mayb even experience Locktober.
HeroFan
10/20/24, 8:46 PM
Masterfully done. This is just about one of the best things I’ve ever read in the SuperHero Genre. Great setup, great conclusion, and the middle? So descriptive, plausible, sexy, hot. You are a skilled and talented writer, my man. This bit, “You fucking pathetic cock slut. Gonna give you what you want…My hero seed…hard and deep…ugh….yeah…. I’m gonna give you ALL I GOT!!! You hear me? Gonna give you…EVERYTHING!!!” he grunted deeply, his breathing now fast and labored, not realizing the foreshadowing of the statement.” Made my head explode. And, “Unghhhh….no…belt……….missing…how………ohhhhhhh…….…must stop him……….must get……control………I need to stop…….” his voice cracked, “…need to stop cumming….but…oh god…….…I…no…control….” his body quivering, being more and more aggressively drained, provided little strength or coordination.” Made my dick explode. Great read. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you!!!

10/22/24, 2:58 PM
@HeroFan HF, Thanks, I appreciate the feedback on what worked for you. Glad you enjoyed it. -JT.
10/21/24, 9:15 PM
Fantastic body switch between Nightwing and Scarecrow. A masterpiece!! Thank you, Sir!!

10/22/24, 2:56 PM
@[John Coldiani](/user/show/10039834) Glad you enjoyed it.
10/14/24, 11:04 PM
Thank you. It’s something new trying a longer story format. I’ve done some stuff on Twitter in the old days but thought this would be an opportunity to develop characters and plot.

10/22/24, 7:56 AM
@[Robas](/user/show/10001600) Thanks for sharing your imagination. This idea is quite different than anything I have read. I very much enjoy longer stories with rich character development and plot. It's a little slower starting than most in terms of the rating categories, but for good reason. Looking forward to reading on...

10/22/24, 10:13 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I love a backstory that helps to explain what happens next 😉 Hopefully if you stick with it, it will all make sense 😈 I have a feeling that Ch 13 will fulfil all the rating categories but of course that’s for the readers to decide. And fingers crossed I don’t break any more of the community guidelines 🤞 Big shout out to the site support team, they spotted some stuff that could be problematic and because they explained it well I could keep going with the story. Thank you for taking the time to comment. I hope you think the style works when it reaches its climax.
Sep 29, 2023
10/21/24, 8:50 AM
It's been a year... but yeah, why not?
BottomBoy
10/19/24, 5:28 PM
Fucking unreal and unreal fucking. More please, Sir.

10/21/24, 3:31 AM
@BottomBoy Thanks BB.
10/20/24, 8:20 AM
𖤐 Lead me Deeply into Lustful Temptation for your Pleasure 𖤐