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Zander
11/4/24, 3:00 PM
I wouldn't call this chapter an alternative ending because nothing changes in the plot at all and nothing, everything is the same as in the original ending. I would call it an epilogue (continuation)...

11/4/24, 5:45 PM
@Zander No, I’d have to respectfully disagree. I think it’s an alternate epilogue. However, in the end isn’t its label.. like the old classic…a case of PoTAto or PotAto.🤔😉

Zander
11/9/24, 3:29 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) There is no significant difference. There is such a saying that the sum does not change from the rearrangement of the terms) in the chapter (this story) the same. There is no difference at all. Dr. Kumar defeated Batman and other heroes and remained so, they just showed Batman's humiliation in front of Gotham. I'm not saying that the story is bad, I liked it very much) because it is written like in dark erotica. But this does not cancel the fact that nothing has changed in the plot and characters. Personally, I see it that way. Your Original story also ended, where Dr. Kumar won and the heroes became slaves. Therefore, I do not see any special changes and the chapter looks more like an Epilogue.

11/9/24, 6:07 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Hi. I wrote this chapter. You're not wrong, I'm calling it an alternate ending since I showed it to @Kyle Cicero and he wanted me to submit it as my own story, so since these aren't all the words and ideas of the original author, I'm using the word 'Alternate' (that way, if Kyle wanted to go a different direction some day, he's free to include or ignore this chapter). I'd be thrilled if you read it after the original story and think of it as an epilogue. Thank you for reading!
M C
11/9/24, 5:39 PM
Can't wait to read more!
Mario
11/9/24, 2:53 AM
I just creamed myself after reading the story about this party, and holy shit, his cock looks like it is actually 10 inches. Derek must be confident to strip and cum for gay parties, if he is truly straight
Top+Bottom
5/16/24, 11:40 AM
"You would serve at my pleasure until I decide otherwise." Hottest line in this whole thing. Damn.

11/8/24, 6:12 AM
@Top+Bottom T+B, Thanks man. I'm glad it worked for you. -JT.
5/12/24, 9:17 PM
This story is epic and when he feels her implant sent me right over the edge ... an instant happy ending and had me wishing I had a ...guy in the kitchen to clean up :rofl::rofl: That implant line though! The attention to detail and the knowlege of women's reproductive health. You have one sexy mind!

11/8/24, 6:11 AM
@[Antnee](/user/show/10043490) Thanks A! Glad you enjoyed it and it struck a cord with you. -JT.
11/7/24, 11:02 PM
Love the direction in this one, specifically just the thorough destruction/remaking/mindfuck for the heroes .... in particular the once proud and strong Batman 🔥😎
11/7/24, 9:40 PM
I really enjoyed this. I'm glad it didn't have anyone older in it.
Anonymous
11/7/24, 5:44 PM
I like this as an alternate timeline, and have always been upset Luke was not bareback Black Cock Only. BBC is the best you can get and I _never_ say no when its being offered. BBC is the only flavour I have ever squirted on.
Zero
11/7/24, 9:17 AM
huh good mix of sweet scenes spicy scenes and plot. Im intrigued to see how everything turns out.
11/7/24, 7:56 AM
We need more of this story! Maybe Frat Daddy becomes Dean Daddy and takes over the school? :smiling_imp: