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11/11/24, 10:40 PM
I want some more of this. Fucking great story. Please continue this story.
11/11/24, 8:18 PM
I cannot describe how thrilled I am to have new chapters of this series. The rewrites have been excellent and tightened the world and the characters to introduce both to readers in a steady and satisfying way. Now we're back to Jewel's training and it's quite the power play. I was surprised by it and love the elements of control and surrender (or lack of it). Excellent chapter and Julian has been changed in so many ways. The auction is going to be awful for Jasper. Not to mention the crew. It will only confirm the crew's suspicions about Adrien even if it's not the whole story. The drama! I loved the sweetness of Jasper and Rhys talking about the auction and the reassurance Rhys doesn't need another pet and isn't tired of Jasper. Aww.
11/10/24, 2:08 AM
Really enjoying your stories.

11/10/24, 9:01 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you, I’m glad to hear it 😁
11/9/24, 4:22 PM
What a great read! I loved the part when we seamlessly switched from Nick in the bag to Nick in the singlet. Bravo!

11/10/24, 8:35 AM
@[Sam30](/user/show/10001955) Thanks! Yeah, I thought using first-person perspective would be a fun way to illustrate that “switch-flip” moment when he fully loses control over his own mind.
11/9/24, 12:31 PM
The wait has been long, but you're back... :service_dog:

Anonymous
11/10/24, 2:04 AM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Next week final chapter drops.
11/9/24, 11:32 AM
Once again, Oak and Nyx being the perfect pair. Glad you're back :)

Anonymous
11/10/24, 2:03 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) I love them so much.
Goon
10/17/24, 2:03 PM
Great story. Loved the boy getting in on the action. Stroked for hours rereading.

11/9/24, 6:19 PM
@Goon Thanks G! Glad you enjoyed it.
11/9/24, 6:11 PM
Here is the original story's link to make finding it easier for people: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10010438 [What’s Up Superman (Sup’s Suppository) ](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10010438)
Zander
11/4/24, 3:00 PM
I wouldn't call this chapter an alternative ending because nothing changes in the plot at all and nothing, everything is the same as in the original ending. I would call it an epilogue (continuation)...

11/4/24, 5:45 PM
@Zander No, I’d have to respectfully disagree. I think it’s an alternate epilogue. However, in the end isn’t its label.. like the old classic…a case of PoTAto or PotAto.🤔😉

Zander
11/9/24, 3:29 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) There is no significant difference. There is such a saying that the sum does not change from the rearrangement of the terms) in the chapter (this story) the same. There is no difference at all. Dr. Kumar defeated Batman and other heroes and remained so, they just showed Batman's humiliation in front of Gotham. I'm not saying that the story is bad, I liked it very much) because it is written like in dark erotica. But this does not cancel the fact that nothing has changed in the plot and characters. Personally, I see it that way. Your Original story also ended, where Dr. Kumar won and the heroes became slaves. Therefore, I do not see any special changes and the chapter looks more like an Epilogue.

11/9/24, 6:07 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Hi. I wrote this chapter. You're not wrong, I'm calling it an alternate ending since I showed it to @Kyle Cicero and he wanted me to submit it as my own story, so since these aren't all the words and ideas of the original author, I'm using the word 'Alternate' (that way, if Kyle wanted to go a different direction some day, he's free to include or ignore this chapter). I'd be thrilled if you read it after the original story and think of it as an epilogue. Thank you for reading!
M C
11/9/24, 5:39 PM
Can't wait to read more!