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Anonymous
2/2/26, 9:13 PM
A more fun and playful chapter, that could still lead to some friction down the line. Personally don't find the heart rate monitor invasive but can understand the perspective. Interesting still the insights into Aaron and the war within Very enjoyable chapter. Despite the word count the chapters are still paced very well.

2/2/26, 9:56 PM
@Anonymous Yeah, this one I decided to break up, otherwise it would just be too long. Glad to hear the chapter was still engaging - fun and playful were just the vibes I was hoping for :blush: Thanks again for reading and the feedback. Really keeps me going. Xxx
2/2/26, 2:23 AM
Holy fucking shit this is one of the best stories I've ever read.

2/2/26, 9:52 PM
@[ARandomTist](/user/show/54932) Aww man, you’re making me blush! Honestly though, thanks so much. Can’t tell you what a motivation boost it is. I hope the upcoming chapters are worth such nice words.
Anonymous
2/2/26, 6:17 PM
This was so hot and funny
2/2/26, 5:26 PM
Hope more chapters are in the works
Anon
2/1/26, 4:17 AM
ya gotta direct the AI better, dude. i work with it a lot and i can tell it's starting to fall apart. some directions that help: don't use sentence fragments, don't use similes (AI is notoriously bad at them), focus on descriptions, don't use the word 'deliberate' (this one i've noticed pops up a lot in AI work for some reason, especially nsfw stuff). also be sure you're describing exactly what you want to happen in a story when you command the AI: "write 500 words about Liam and Noah working out at the gym. Noah mentions his cousin will be joining them at a party later that week and Liam is nervous. Noah convinces him by guilt tripping and hazing him, reminding him to 'be cool' and 'not be weird about it'." AI will follow a blueprint fairly accurately and expand on stuff you feel you can't (though human writing is superior). anyway your idea is still really solid. its taking a long time to get to the romance, if that's the intended outcome, and a long time to step forward in the sexy department. Feels like sometimes you repeat chapters just with a different flavor. i really liked the wind up in the earlier chapters and these middle ones have kind of stagnated and circled around each other a lot. Might be the AI's fault, at least partially.

2/1/26, 5:05 PM
@Anon at that point, why not just actually write the damn thing yourself?

twistup
2/2/26, 2:34 PM
@[Jules the Werewolf](/user/show/913350) it's the diff between writing 200 words of commands versus 3000 words of actual writing. Human writing is better, AI is just easier and faster for some people.
2/2/26, 7:02 AM
At this point, I'd rather let Liam got someone else and Noah got punish :P Dylan could work.
Anonymous
2/2/26, 6:26 AM
Loved this its as great as always!! Hope for more soon!
Anonymous
2/1/26, 11:56 PM
Is this the end of the story or there will be another chapter? Hope to hear from you soon.
2/1/26, 2:11 AM
What I most loved about this, beside the wrestling stuff which I'll always love, was the descriptions of what they were going to do to Luke, the two choices they gave him, either way of which would make him a slut: one, their private slut, the other, their public one. And then the choice was made for him. So hot!

2/1/26, 2:03 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I agree! that part was fantastic! The struggle with the decision was so good. Also, I love all the references to the smells ... the pheromone elements work for me!

2/1/26, 11:48 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) This is where it starts to get wild
1/4/26, 11:31 AM
Great start to a hopefully long story!

2/1/26, 11:39 PM
@[chalky](/user/show/10031427) There's going to be 15+ chapters