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tom
11/23/24, 1:55 PM
such a brilliant series with an amazing ending. I did not see that coming but was hot!
Nov 22, 2024
gdlosh13@gmail.com
11/23/24, 1:23 PM
I would give that gym 5 stars. I want to join that gym.
Nov 22, 2024
11/22/24, 11:35 PM
Hot. Definitely filled a few jerk sessions before I finished the story. 🤤

11/22/24, 11:40 PM
@Flamefox23 These are the best comments. I love knowing my ideas results in men jerking off. I only hope you shot your cum all over your chest and belly, and then smeared it all over yourself. Hot stuff!
Nov 22, 2024
11/21/24, 11:36 PM
Okay ... I should say that this story was unexpected. It came about because when I was at the gym this morning, I took a shower after my workout. And in the shower, I couldn't help but notice that the soap that's provided by the gym, and coming out of the wall-mounted dispenser, looked really similar to cum. Well that just got my mind going. What if this is cum? What if I'm lathering up in other men's cum? Well, I got home and started writing. Did I know Sam was going to be a social media influencer? Nope. That just seemed to happen as I wrote it. But somehow, that created the idea of these camera pillars that would give adrenaline boosts to the workouts. Weird ... I had no idea where that came from. Anyways, I guess what I'm saying is .... I don't know where this story came from. All I had was an idea for cum-filled soap dispenser, and next thing I know, I churned out a story that I hadn't planned in the least. So there's probably continuity errors that make no sense, probably a lot of questions that I really don't have answers to. And no, I don't plan on writing another chapter. But if any of you guys want to add onto this story, please be my guest. And please please, if any of you guys are rich and think of opening your own gym that has cum-filled soap dispensers .... please extend me a membership.

11/22/24, 7:19 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I love this story precisely because it has a dream-like intensity and doesn't get too bogged down in exposition. It's packing a lot of powerful images--the white teeth, the moment where Marshall rubs his cum into Sam's dick, etc--into a short story, and I love the notion of the selfie-taking pillars delivering a boost of adrenaline and testosterone every time the picture is snapped. Great work!

11/22/24, 7:38 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I think you're right, Hypnothrill. It very much so has a dream-like quality. When writing, I really was getting into the fluid exchange. The visual images of rubbing your cum onto another guy, they rubbing their cum onto you. And all that fluid exchange causing the men to lose both their inhibitions and self-control, furthering them into a heightened state of orgasmic bliss. Geez ... I'm getting hard now just thinking about it. Thank you for reading. Now, when can I read your next story? Seriously ... I feel I'm not the only guy anxiously awaiting the next Hypnothrill fantasy.
Nov 22, 2024
11/22/24, 2:01 PM
Very hot story! And welcome back to writing! XD
Anonymous
11/22/24, 1:58 PM
God this was so hot, so excited to read more!
11/22/24, 6:53 AM
Hot story. He wants it but doesn't but does and finally gives in to his true nature. So satisfying.
11/22/24, 2:37 AM
This story is just magical. Just FANTASTIC and erotic.