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11/25/24, 6:48 AM
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11/24/24, 9:07 PM
I'm shocked that there aren't any comments yet! This story is really good and I'm looking forward to what's to come. Now I have to go back and look at your other series.

11/24/24, 9:23 PM
@[HimboPup](/user/show/10011980) Thank you that's very kind. They'll slot together so you will see plenty of cross over characters. As to why there are not many comments, pass. But I only started writing them last month for the Halloween challenge maybe it takes awhile for readers to commit to reading longer more character driven stories and new writers to learn what the audience wants. Plus this one only went uo a few days ago :blush:
Nov 22, 2024
11/24/24, 8:42 AM
Just joining in the chorus saying this was AMAZING. As @Hypnothrill said, you do an amazing job with the dreamlike quality of the story--the fact that Sam doesn't recognize Marshall's clothing until after they've spoken a while, the sudden appearance of other characters (when Sam enters he mentions that the gym isn't full, but by the shower scene there are lots of guys), and the weird flow of time in the space in general adds something extra special. Plus there's something to be said for instant-conversion stories: I love a good long resistance/brainwashing period, but sometimes it's amazing to watch someone just instantly fall under the spell. Fantastic job. :)
11/23/24, 9:39 PM
May we have some more please, sir? Excellent story!
Nov 22, 2024
gdlosh13@gmail.com
11/23/24, 1:22 PM
I would give them 5 stars. I want to join that gym.

11/23/24, 3:40 PM
@gdlosh13@gmail.com Me too!!! Just so you know, a couple other things inspired this story. Obviously, I mentioned my recent trip to the gym, and which I noticed the cum-like soap in the shower. But at my local gym, which happens to be very close to a military base, I notice a lot of the guys posing in the locker room. Men between the ages of 18 - 30, seem to stand in front of the mirror (half-naked or fully clothed) and just talk selfies over and over. I've never seen anything quite like it. Plus there's a guy on [Instagram](https://www.instagram.com/rickyaldrete/) who takes this really hot gym selfies. He's always wearing spandex, and just looks incredibly hot. So I guess the combination of all this got me thinking about a hot, gym transformation scene. Again, it's a gym that I would want to join.

Anonymous
11/23/24, 4:00 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Well I was am extremely hot story. I did not see ir coming until the soap scene. I was hooked. Well to be honest I was hooked from the flashes. I am not a gym person but would join that one.
Nov 22, 2024
11/23/24, 10:01 AM
This store was awesome. It is a nice change of pace from your usual work, but please take it a a compliment! You are really showcasing your writing skills in different genres. The pacing was good and action was better. Thank you for writing! Always looking forward to reading your stuff!

11/23/24, 3:34 PM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) I appreciate the compliment. Thanks.
tom
11/23/24, 1:55 PM
such a brilliant series with an amazing ending. I did not see that coming but was hot!
Nov 22, 2024
gdlosh13@gmail.com
11/23/24, 1:23 PM
I would give that gym 5 stars. I want to join that gym.
Nov 22, 2024
11/22/24, 11:35 PM
Hot. Definitely filled a few jerk sessions before I finished the story. 🤤

11/22/24, 11:40 PM
@Flamefox23 These are the best comments. I love knowing my ideas results in men jerking off. I only hope you shot your cum all over your chest and belly, and then smeared it all over yourself. Hot stuff!