A spectacular chapter, well worth the unusual wait! Larry is needing discipline... Ranger Paul is getting Alpha Ruiz twitterpated.... two Mondjugen fathers, one of the cloth and one by blood, trying to come to terms with their new desires and suddenly scooped up by one of the pack... and an Alpha assassinated by his own pack. Can't wait to see what thrills and fun our wolves get up to next time!

@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Honestly with Larry's comment and Yousef's resigned sadness I think it's pretty telling that is Al, as well as with who he's with- officers. It's also interesting to see how Yousef and Larry react to that. Larry sees no issue with that because well for him...Al was an threat who was weirdly obsessed with him. Yousef on the other hand lost Frank to that same same spell so he isn't as okay with what happened, though he has come to accept it had to be done to save them all. Problem is, Yousef is probably about to start having more trouble with his other relationships outside the pack...some of those tags do not bode well if what I think is going to happen will happen. As for Yousef, looking at Mahmood's confession to Ray...we really do see the other side of what happens when weres leave behind their families and it's realistically not pretty- though Tom also shows us the other side of that as well. Couple that with the fact that Yousef's family is naturally tight knit due to the struggles they faced, and it has a much more somber and dreadful affect overall. Yousef I'm afraid has badly miscalculated in his attempts to keep things secret- and is about to pay a terrible price I fear. Then again, while he may not have been subject to being a sacrifice- Yousef's curse seems to be that those around him wind up sacrificed. Seth is no longer around, Frank is now a dog, his faith is being scrutinized by some (though others are okay with it- as was the wolf king and his pack during his court session to a degree so it doesn't seem that much of an issue), Mahmood might wind up in the one thing Yousef wanted to keep his father away from, and his being a seer could get him involved in the deadly games of werewolf politics. If alphas can be killed by their own packs in coups- who is to say of what will befall seers? The wolf king declared Yousef protected, but are seers seen as valuable even without that protection inherently, or is Yosuef protected as long as the Wolf King is still in power?

the transfiguration of the leaded glass saints. score one for ecumenical outreach! when the Pack encountered the German Shepherd at the hockey game, I thought for a minute that Frank had a side gig! this story is tight as a drum, all the elements are moving like clockwork. flawless chapter, the canid highlight of this mutt's week. awoo!

Another enjoyable chapter only marred (for probably me only) of the gratuitous mention of everyone's favorite, (but mine) Sammy Sue. haha

So Awesome Mister, Thanks!!

Jack, you always make us want more! Good thing Johnny Football has so much to give. You are a master of your craft.

sitting here naked in the dark in the wee hours, making feral huff noises as i'm keeping pace with the story, faster and harder, ending up feeling rode as hard as a jack parker bottom, shaking my head in wonder yet again at the marvel you just laid on us. what a gift. thank you.

Not at all the resolution I was expecting. Great chapter!

Loved this. We all tuned in expecting more super hot humiliation and bottoming and instead get the swerve of John's super hot domination and topping. Few besides Mister Parker could craft a character like John whose role can vary from story to story so completely and yet never seem like either one of them is false. Should we dub him 'The Thinking Man's Pornster'?

Another smoking hot chapter. I’m always envious at the way you plot out a story.