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12/17/24, 2:36 PM
WHOA.. that was wild. good storytelling
12/17/24, 2:21 PM
ANOTHER great story with the setting being this wonderful gym. I love the references to the armpit and licking ... i love smells and it pulls me deeper into the story. THANK YOU
12/15/24, 4:23 PM
Incredibly hot story. I love how much he wants to give in. It’s relatable

12/16/24, 5:34 PM
@[TheWalkingAlive](/user/show/925088) Glad you enjoyed it, and love the profile pic ;)

12/17/24, 6:34 AM
@[autoDream](/user/show/20698) Thanks! It’s a selfie in case you were wondering :relaxed:
Anonymous
12/16/24, 5:34 PM
Is this story going to continue?

Anonymous
12/17/24, 1:48 AM
@Anonymous Hey, thanks for reading - yes, definitely will continue! Sorry for the wait. Amazon ended Vella so I switched gears to wrap up my Two Broke Arms story. Two new episodes there and am finishing up final chapter for book release.
12/15/24, 7:15 PM
Love all your stories

12/16/24, 5:59 PM
@[Princeazrael](/user/show/1082586) <3
12/15/24, 6:29 PM
Very cute and sexy. I like the potential. Too bad we didn't get any Uncle pov. Also too bad the dad didn't get hypnoed for fun too. But yeah fun and sexy. Good story!

12/16/24, 5:59 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Yeah, I think because I put myself into Jese's position, it wasn't something I wanted to get too deep into. I toyed around with the idea of him being hypnotized and actually finding Jese in the uncle's bedroom, but a suggestion made it so he saw just some random twink, and not his son. So he would apologize and leave after a few more words from the uncle. Jese, at first would think his life was over, but in the end it would just be a Master flex by the uncle to show "awake" Jese just how real hypnosis was. No way his dad would just see him naked there, and now go crazy otherwise.
12/16/24, 11:31 AM
An amazing hypnosis story. One of the best actually. I agree with StageShowMM, it's borderline uncomfortable, but that makes it so hot. Also that you leave so much to the readers imagination. Usually, I love juicy things described in detail, but in this case it just works like this!
12/16/24, 6:42 AM
Really good work. Thanks for sharing this.
12/15/24, 11:29 PM
Really hot stuff. I love boundary violation that gets right up to the point of making me uncomfortable, and the back-and-forth in the protagonist's head is super hot too. Well done!
Leo
12/15/24, 9:59 PM
Please please make a chapter where the dad falls under hypnosis!! There’s nothing hotter than a sexy, obedient daddy!