Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/3/25, 7:09 AM
It varies by chapter which of these two annoys me more. Neither is likeable, you need Liam to be this stupid for the story but it just comes across as the special needs kid being bullied by a piece of shit jock.

12/10/25, 4:59 AM
@Anonymous Hard to understand why you're coming back chapter after chapter if it annoys you, but binge reading it while complaining about the story and characters isn't likeable, either. I think there's enough in the story to show that Noah cares about Liam and that Liam wants what is happening, but the dynamic requires the more dominant, assured guy to break down the repressed, insecure one for both to get what they actually want. That's my read for now at least. I think a lot of people reading it find it hot, so there are a lot of stories on here... better to find the ones you like rather that complain about the ones others like.
12/8/25, 9:06 PM
Great work. Are we missing a bit? Seems like there was a sauna blow job we didn’t get to read?

12/9/25, 1:18 AM
@[byyourcmnd](/user/show/10026479) I caught that too. But I think it was his imagination after licking the cum up. Because that was supposed to have been his first blowjob the shop owner but the story did say second.

12/9/25, 2:00 PM
@[Ragnarok](/user/show/14073) Sorry folks! There was a part that didn't transfer over. I've added it to the previous chapter and hopefully it will be live soon!

12/9/25, 2:42 PM
@[LockedPig](/user/show/10049274) It's all good. We'll look forward to the previous chapter being updated but we really want the next one.😉

12/9/25, 4:39 PM
@[Ragnarok](/user/show/14073) Dont worry, all 7 parts are cued up for release and will be out very soon!

12/10/25, 4:31 PM
@[LockedPig](/user/show/10049274) Previous chapter is updated for those who are interested!

12/10/25, 8:32 PM
@[LockedPig](/user/show/10049274) It was so good. I am hoping the next chapter cums soon. So I can too. 😉
12/10/25, 7:07 PM
Caleb has learned well to submit, obey, and serve. The last step Marcus has proclaimed is complete surrender. The preparation for that step will ease Caleb to the edge and ensure that without doubt or hesitation the boy will make his last decision into lifetime servitude -- no will power or motivation to do anything but what Marcus desires without thought or hesitation -- complete and utter enslavement. This is not the harsh hateful forced non-consensual slavery of history. This was Marcus applying his intelligence and Dominant personality to slowly remove all sense of ego and independence from Caleb, so slowly that Caleb had almost no sense of the power shift. Why does that feel so wrong and so right at the same time? I could use a lot of counseling to help me sort this out. i wonder if Marcus would be willing to help me with this? Thanks so much to the author for opening my mind so vividly to new perspectives and possibilities.
12/10/25, 3:15 PM
This was so amazing. Why can't this happen to me? I would love it.
12/10/25, 9:18 AM
i felt i had betrayed Marcus when i shamefully gave the story a 'Wanking Material' score of 5.
12/10/25, 8:57 AM
This story wasn't exactly something i read with the pleasure of titilating my imagination. It definitely started that way, but as it progressed It felt a little more like a training session, not just for Caleb but for every beta boy who reads it. It described my mental struggle between memories of the bliss of ejaculation and the new slowly acquired need for the pleasure of submission and obedience. Early on it seemed almost a game, a fun kinky sexy means to get to know this new significant other. That's all it was until the day i realized that my deep devotion and my pleasure through submission to this significant other, once my boyfriend, then my Dom, and now so much more. I could feel the power exchange and control slipping away in exchange somehow for the pleasure of my devotion. Thanks, Sam, for creating this new world in which power shifted and perspectives were transformed.
12/9/25, 3:47 PM
I don't think it's fair that Trevor who created this new slut isn't getting any rewards.
Z
11/7/25, 9:16 AM
Have you some news to share with us?

11/8/25, 4:17 AM
@Z Half way finished. I'd get to writing this weekend.

J
11/17/25, 2:28 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) New Post soon?

Anonymous
12/2/25, 10:38 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) So is this story discontinued?🥲

12/2/25, 12:15 PM
@Anonymous No. I just never got to finishing it but I haven't forgotten about the story.

J
12/9/25, 1:46 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Will you still be continuing the story?
Anonymous
12/9/25, 4:25 AM
Hope that there will be another chapter soon! This is one of the best series on this site.
12/8/25, 5:38 PM
Scorching hot, man! Looking forward to the next entry!

12/9/25, 2:17 AM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) Thanks for another great comment. I’m hoping I will be able to get another chapter up before the end of the month, but we’ll see.