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11/13/24, 8:19 AM
So Dan lets this boy run his house. Crazy. And people eating slime off the floor. You go a little too far. That would make me so sick. And I hope he had plastic on the floor so not to destroy his home from the piss.

Steve
1/20/25, 11:13 PM
@[SacGuy](/user/show/10054871) Haha frick, it’s fantasy! Just imagine it’s a tile or vinyl floor and you’re all good! Dan is obviously a clean freak, and Jake treats him with respect once the scene is over… sounds kinda perfect to me 🤷🏻‍♂️
Anon
1/20/25, 3:54 AM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) I am grateful to know my comments are well received. Honestly, it's kind of a miracle Yousef didn't wind up infuriated at Toddson during his little rant- in light of all of his family history Toddson was an utter jerk even more than when I first read him...but he probably knew getting mad wouldn't end well- so he was just saddened and uncomfortable- which is understandable. But I think most of the pack really does not have that experience of clinging to family because you could lose them due to war. They had their struggles, but lived mostly in peacetime conditions- so they had the luxury to leave them and not feel too bad. Though that still leaves them hanging, but it is what it is. Mullin's wife and children probably are just confused and disoriented right now- I would not want to be them right now....though considering his wild antics perhaps they are sad but relieved Mullins is gone. But then again, Mullins was in no shape to continue his marriage and it's best he left. There was just no ending where they'd be able to stay together in Mullin's case. And yes, that family history playing a role does make sense. As much as werewolves are different from humans- they do blend into human society. There are interactions- however much werewolves hold themselves to be superior to humans. And I think this ties right back to the views of the jinn and their behaviors should Yousef take that avenue to understand things (honestly I suspect his dad may bring it up or somebody he runs into). I think what's also interesting is the idea of werewolf superiority which we see from many weres. Ruiz definetely holds to this, but Yousef does not- as we see in his talk with Father Ray. The way the jinn and humans are seen as kindreds in their fates could be something Yousef explores in his own time. What's particularly interesting on that angle is that historically speaking- the jinns were at least to some degree seen as gods (likely tutelary dieties) in the pre-Islamic period (inscriptions in the Hejaz region and in Palmyra and Baalbek have the words for jinn and god often used interchangeably. But yes, Mahmood being a mondjugen potentially has the risk of breaking Yousef's family apart- which would really be the worst case scenario. While Mullins was glad to just get away from his family, I don't see Yousef doing that. He might be a werewolf, but due to his family history- breaking off from family is likely something he'd never entertain unless necessary- and while he was likely trying to do that- something tells me he's going to need to re-evaluate this stance because now his father might get roped into the messiness of werewolf life at worst case. I think him meeting his father is going to be a major wake-up call about how while he may be having a wonderful joyride right now- that comes with it's own price. Yousef is probably going to need to make sure the others don't find out about his dad. That would not end well at all. He was already reeling from what happened to Frank- and I don't think he's going to be so gung ho about sacrificing people after what happened there. Him and Bill seem to be getting closer- and we have to see what comes of that as well. As well as his seer training.... Honestly, if Yousef ever figures out that Ruiz is subtly planning to get Yosuef to forget about his family in light of his meeting with his dad, I don't see that ending well either. As it stands, Yousef's background is a bit different from the other weres, and that will lead to things down the line I suspect.
Anon
1/20/25, 1:28 AM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) There's also something else I've been thinking about as well. Earlier chapters if I remember correctly indicate Yousef's family had to deal with war and civil unrest in Lebanon before coming to the states- and historically it would make sense- Lebanon in the past century has seen religious tensions and civil war. To that end, Mahmood might not just be scared for his son, but also potentially angry as well at Yousef for just stopping communication. There's a more personal element to that. Unlike most of the other weres, none of them have ever really deal with having to experience human conflict on a large scale even if indirectly. Werewolf fights yes- but nothing that is a large scale conflict. Even Mullins at best was dealing with small scale thugs. As difficult as werewolf life is, that's one thing they've been fortunate to dodge. Yousef likely doesn't want to see his father because he knows in line of that- he has screwed up. Simply dropping off the face of the earth is not as easy for him as it is for the other weres. He probably thought he'd be able to get away with just ghosting his family but well...he really should have known better. At the same time- I get why he did it. Explaining what has happened to him would practically be impossible- not to mention potentially put his family at risk- or worse have a repeat of what happened to the FBI agent happening. In all honesty, Mahmood being a mondjugen is probably about to make Yousef's life very complicated....and not in a good way.

1/20/25, 2:53 AM
@[Anon](/user/show/10049352) Glad to see you picked up on Mo's and Yousef's family history. That plays a part, in good time. Thank you for the comments, bro!
1/19/25, 3:10 PM
I love the worldbuilding here! I don’t know anything at all about the actual world of Pokémon, but this fashion show along with the creative breeding was so interesting. And **fuck**, oral knotting? Brutal roadhead facefucks? A daisy chain right at the end? That shit was hot. I’m excited to see the cum inflation tag come to fruition, too. I’ll be looking forward to more.

1/19/25, 3:12 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I forgot to add how much I valued your portrayal of mental illness in this story—thanks for not shying away from reality even in scorching fantasy smut.

1/19/25, 8:59 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thanks so much for your comments as always, Soren, they're always really helpful for keeping me wanting to write. Sorry you had to read the unformatted version--I've got an update currently pending acceptance that should make reading this much more pleasant an experience. Pun intended. On a more serious note, also thank you for the compliment on mental illness specifically! My favorite thing to write is the intimacy and connection between characters, both externally and within the perspective character's inner dialogue with themselves, because I think that makes writing hotter, and _realism_ even in the weird Pokemon fanfiction I wanted to write was a core tenet of the series, so here we are. It has the unfortunate (for some) side effect of ending up making me write my smut with a bit more personality than I think most people might be looking for, but clearly they aren't my audience, haha. :)
DomTop4MuscleSub
6/19/20, 1:33 AM
Next up, Thor definitely needs to begin experiencing chastity. He'll get very familiar with his ass after he starts using toys for pleasure, when his only two options are them or Lan's dick.

Anonymous
1/19/25, 4:52 AM
@DomTop4MuscleSub My thoughts exactly!
Anonymous
1/19/25, 1:31 AM
Incredible!!!!
Anonymous
1/18/25, 2:23 AM
GH 12070. Is there a way to toggle the notifications for earning points for various tasks? They cover up the X button to close menus.
12/15/24, 4:14 PM
great to see a new story - very hot. where will it go from here ?

12/16/24, 5:34 PM
@[eastbay](/user/show/1576204) I'm toying around with some cute ideas in my head, but nothing set in stone yet. Probably Jese getting the silly idea of going on a date with his uncle.

1/17/25, 6:16 PM
@[autoDream](/user/show/20698) Wow. Please yes.
1/17/25, 7:51 AM
Hot! Love the humiliation. Though as fun as it is seeing an arrogant prince be taken down, I would rather see several of his hunky royal guards to be debased alongside him and used by the orcs. I prefer to seeing muscular handsome victims, stripped of their dignity and pride and though the prince is handsome, from his description hes not quite the hunky sort of man that his guards are. Hoping that a muscular royal guard from a aristocratic linage or their captain be brutally taken down and shamed. Unless he has a hunky older brother whos coming to search for him later?
1/16/25, 11:33 PM
awesome first chapter. thank you.