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8/10/25, 8:39 AM
the crowd is buzzing and offering all sorts of suggestions, eh? 😂 Means you've got a classic on your hands! Wonderful beginning. Loved it. I have no suggestions, just happy to come along for the ride. ... Oh who am I kidding. Lock that good boy up. Obedience is pleasure after all.
8/10/25, 7:23 AM
Amazing story. I definitely think it would be interesting to have mike have his body changed without realising it or have him be trained and then have to deal with the after effects while awake. Like his nipples being trained or getting piercings, feeling the need to service other men. Feeling the need to film himself doing lewd things. Ya know? Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!
8/10/25, 12:42 AM
I really do hope there is no chastity, it feels pointless and just mean in this case, especially when he is already given commands that he can't cum without permission. AND, as said above, edging is a good training tool. I also hope that there is no shaving, let him be natural in his body form. I do think some pet play would be fun. I also really love how he is still studying and going to the gym and is being given commands for "Mike to act and be normal", so good. I really do hope that in time others get to be trained into good boys for Josh. He needs a stable, hehe. Sooo yeah, I have reread this story multiple times and I keep on coming back to it. I really love the set up. I especially love us getting in both their heads, its so sexy to enjoy both the master and his thoughts and the good boy and his. No matter what developments happen in the future, this chapter is marvelous and sexy. And thank you for it.
8/10/25, 12:24 AM
I don't think Mike should have his dick locked physically. He can't cum without permission already, but it's good for him to edge for his Master.
8/9/25, 9:39 PM
Chastity seems like a fun development. I think leaning more into the hot thongs is fun. Maybe add some petplay? Great start to the story so far!
8/9/25, 8:37 PM
Great story, loved the POV from both Mike and Josh. Love more humiliation felt by Mike, that he’s forced to reporting back to Josh. Maybe students on campus notice his tented boner in his pants, his “boner boy” nickname sticks. Daily after his AM workout he sits in the last stall of the locker room, can’t help but to work the gloryhole, typically sucking off 12 guys, cum is breakfast of champions and loaded with protein before class or maybe getting caught checking out the cocks on guys in the gym shower, conflicted by this, but still straight mike. Keep up the outstanding and hot writing.
8/9/25, 7:39 PM
I liked your story and the slow build to conversion. I agree with the shaving his body to show his build. I also agree that more frat boys show be added; maybe with Mike's aid. I don't like the idea of caging as he has already been mentally caged. Since Mike started this study for the money maybe he is put to use for money - along with those he recruits. Lots of possibilities!
8/9/25, 6:04 PM
Well done on the pacing and the progressive buildup of Mike's conditioning. As to what more to do with him, I'd recommend: - nipple sensitivity. Put emphasis on the size of his pecs. - greater desire to show of his muscular body. ++highly++ encourage him to remove his body hair. Really helps highlight his build. But also make him want to pose and flex. - encourage Mike to get a dildo for anal and oral training on his own. Perhaps this could even cause Mike to get a plug to help keep his Master's cum inside. - maybe having his programming bleed out in other subtle ways. Maybe he starts taking notice of attractive guys around campus. Or maybe he alters his regular clothes for tight or revealing clothing? - Switch from being addressed as Sir to Master. - And lastly, if you want, applying chastity would be amazing to read about. This is more about the physical then mental in this case. Mike is mentally locked as is. He is bound to his master and can't cum without permission. Chastity in this case, restricts a physical factor to amplify a mental one. Without access to his, he will endeavor to get his Master's even more. Which aligns with his programming. He wants his Master's cock and cum, he doesn't need his. It reinforces his condition and position.
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8/9/25, 5:36 PM
Well, nipple sensitivity training is a must I’d say, with how much Josh seems to take interest in Mike’s nips. Get Josh to train his pecs into a pair of worthy muscle tits, and his nips to be so sensitive that it’d be a torture to wear shirt with how they keep stimulating his nips just from rubbing against the fabric from everyday routine.
Anonymous
8/9/25, 5:14 PM
Great story great setup , “hearing” the files adds a lot. I also have to confess that even though it’s not usually my thing, I kept getting excited for him to be put into chastity. I liked thinking about how Mike would have to rationalize it. Also I liked how Mike put his own twist on the commands when awake - like rationalizing the thong. Lastly agree it’d be hot if eventually one of his bros got hooked up too and Mike slowly helped with his indoctrination during the night