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8/10/25, 5:53 PM
I hope bad things happen to Jack. He was supposed to look out for Ev. Not blackmail him, to make him his slave. That's not power thT a bitch move. He already had jack. He new of all his flaws. Jack's a horrible person.

8/10/25, 5:54 PM
@[SacGuy](/user/show/10054871) May I suggest then reading a different series then.
8/10/25, 4:59 PM
Well, if he is a “good fag”, he should want to alter his appearance. Some suggestions might come from Josh BUT, just like the thong was Mike’s idea, other changes might be initiated by Mike. For example, Josh could suggest a undercut hairstyle but Mike could have his hair colored (maybe with his first cash payment). Josh could suggest an armband tattoo and Mike could add a sexy tramp stamp above his ass. Josh could suggest Mike start wearing more spandex and lycra but Mike decides on lycra booty shorts and a crop top. Josh might start to worry that he has flipped a switch and lost control.
Tim
8/10/25, 11:03 AM
Such a hot story so far. I hope the next chapter is not to far away!
8/10/25, 8:39 AM
the crowd is buzzing and offering all sorts of suggestions, eh? 😂 Means you've got a classic on your hands! Wonderful beginning. Loved it. I have no suggestions, just happy to come along for the ride. ... Oh who am I kidding. Lock that good boy up. Obedience is pleasure after all.
8/10/25, 7:23 AM
Amazing story. I definitely think it would be interesting to have mike have his body changed without realising it or have him be trained and then have to deal with the after effects while awake. Like his nipples being trained or getting piercings, feeling the need to service other men. Feeling the need to film himself doing lewd things. Ya know? Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!
8/10/25, 12:42 AM
I really do hope there is no chastity, it feels pointless and just mean in this case, especially when he is already given commands that he can't cum without permission. AND, as said above, edging is a good training tool. I also hope that there is no shaving, let him be natural in his body form. I do think some pet play would be fun. I also really love how he is still studying and going to the gym and is being given commands for "Mike to act and be normal", so good. I really do hope that in time others get to be trained into good boys for Josh. He needs a stable, hehe. Sooo yeah, I have reread this story multiple times and I keep on coming back to it. I really love the set up. I especially love us getting in both their heads, its so sexy to enjoy both the master and his thoughts and the good boy and his. No matter what developments happen in the future, this chapter is marvelous and sexy. And thank you for it.
8/10/25, 12:24 AM
I don't think Mike should have his dick locked physically. He can't cum without permission already, but it's good for him to edge for his Master.
8/9/25, 9:39 PM
Chastity seems like a fun development. I think leaning more into the hot thongs is fun. Maybe add some petplay? Great start to the story so far!
8/9/25, 8:37 PM
Great story, loved the POV from both Mike and Josh. Love more humiliation felt by Mike, that he’s forced to reporting back to Josh. Maybe students on campus notice his tented boner in his pants, his “boner boy” nickname sticks. Daily after his AM workout he sits in the last stall of the locker room, can’t help but to work the gloryhole, typically sucking off 12 guys, cum is breakfast of champions and loaded with protein before class or maybe getting caught checking out the cocks on guys in the gym shower, conflicted by this, but still straight mike. Keep up the outstanding and hot writing.
8/9/25, 7:39 PM
I liked your story and the slow build to conversion. I agree with the shaving his body to show his build. I also agree that more frat boys show be added; maybe with Mike's aid. I don't like the idea of caging as he has already been mentally caged. Since Mike started this study for the money maybe he is put to use for money - along with those he recruits. Lots of possibilities!