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2/12/25, 8:28 PM
Super hot
2/12/25, 7:50 PM
I love how you started Chapter 1 - got me hooked right away. The story moved well and was definitely has me wanting more.
2/12/25, 4:11 AM
great story, can’t wait for the next chapter.
2/11/25, 9:10 PM
Can't wait for the next chapter :blush: it's promising

2/11/25, 9:34 PM
@[nebji](/user/show/994909) Thank you!! It's going to get steamy! Several chapters are queued up and will publish regularly until the backlog's cleared :wink: Really appreciate your comment!
Mar 25, 2023
2/11/25, 4:40 PM
Hooooot
2/11/25, 9:39 AM
Also intrigued.
2/11/25, 3:01 AM
Raz is really having a difficult time. Having no control or peace as he becomes every horny camper boy's toy.
HypnoMutt
2/10/25, 1:36 PM
This entire chapter is the image of a fever dream, led by Mo's distorted awareness and carried out through the increasingly fragmented narrative and dialogue as you open a window on the pack's pre-baptism TF. I read this chapter during "the wolf's hour" in local time - between 3-4 AM - an appropriate liminal space where one day transforms to the next. I also appreciate the explication in the comments that penetrates the layers of your writing and expands our understanding of the motivations, influences and context that's driving these complex characters through a fast-paced scenario of instability and increasing threat. This is amazing and challenging work that pulls me in completely with every new post.

2/11/25, 2:27 AM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) I'm so pleased you are enjoying it. It's posts like these that really get me cranking out more chapters. Working on the next one presently.
2/11/25, 12:57 AM
Great start.
2/10/25, 9:40 PM
What a FUN story. I loved it. THANK YOU

2/11/25, 12:23 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) You're very welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it 😉