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Sean
2/17/25, 6:08 AM
My Gh's Id is 975482 & Gpsh's is 3944
2/17/25, 4:33 AM
Loving this. Cant wait for more.
Kanan
2/16/25, 10:16 PM
Fuck this is so hot, really hope there’s more to come!
2/16/25, 4:51 PM
Are you continuing the story?
thelavenderpup
2/14/25, 9:29 PM
hello, nice story, just a suggestion the part where Will says "When I came out to my parents, that night I went to sleep and I woke up in there." is kinda creepy and borderline incest something like "they proposed it to me and i was interested" is better in my opinion also i would have loved a chapter where Will shows Sam all the toys. the jump from Will being just interested to straight up signing his life away is too harsh. A couple of days of the two boys play together would be beneficial This are just some suggestions hopefully you take them into consideration 🥰

2/16/25, 2:20 AM
@thelavenderpup I so get you - yeah honestly I never thought of it like that I think I just rushed it aha - very good criticism thank you :)))

thelavenderpup
2/16/25, 2:39 PM
@[Sam Wilson](/user/show/10048195) you're welcome also I noticed some small grammar errors. if you need someone to proof read i volunteer 🥰
2/16/25, 6:34 AM
This is so good. I can't wait for the next chapter!
2/16/25, 4:00 AM
Love these games Gh- 92956 Gpsh- 654
2/12/25, 4:04 PM
This is a great story! I know it was posted in 2023, but are you planning on ever following up on it? I simply adore how brazenly dirty Maxwell is - I would love to see how the other company employees act around him, having also been brainwashed. And I’m wondering, how would he and his company get away with what they do in front of or around the wider public, say; the families of the employees being covered in their boss’ shit and piss etc? I guess depending on whether you plan on Brad becoming a fattened and farting slob himself or forever Maxwell’s slave, I wonder how his parents or anyone else in his life would react - how great if they are enraptured along with him, having it be not only the company, but all the employees extended relatives being swept along this disgusting office culture, treating it as normal. Surely there’s some higher authority or government organisation that allows this indoctrination to happen? A society full of people openly serving and consuming the shit of these disgusting slobs, is very hot to think about 🥵 I looooved all the brainwashing elements - the video instruction, as I love in all the stories when they get both the visual and audio indoctrination - would be hot if Brad must repeat mantras of devoted worship along with the other employees, all of them saying the same phrases at the same time, like company drones, all perfect little toilets I wonder do they and others get health check ups? Doctors and nurses encouraging their filthy and disgusting lifestyles and diets? Because surely, if they went to the doctor; they’d notice things too? I’m just wondering of course how it would all work out on a wider scale. Simply a great and fabulously raunchy story - more Maxwell and Brad please 😋😋

2/16/25, 1:52 AM
@[roseamethyst](/user/show/10059510) If I have a good enough idea, I might. ;) In this world, I think society is slowly being subverted towards accepting these things as 'normal'. You should check out the sequel. I might do more stories about it. It'll depend, but I think if he rises through the ranks he'll become as fat and disgusting as his boss. I'm sure there's more at the company even bigger and nastier than Maxwell is. Writing the hypnotic indoctrination was pretty fun IIRC. I was worried it would be too long. I'm sure they do, and these things are probably encouraged. It's a conspiracy. Thanks! X)
2/15/25, 9:46 PM
Still working my way through Digisekai, but am enjoying the events (and the guys available therein) this month. GH ID 1292865