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2/25/25, 12:59 PM
Toddson is pushing his luck. I previously thought he was a fair, if pragmatic Alpha. But now he's kidnapping familiars? To what purpose? Also, sounds like he's trying to get a leg up in the Alpha Council. Trying to prearrange a trade, or a land transfer? His line about firefighters makes it sound like he wants to enthrall some of the emergency services workers in Everett, a subtler but more nefarious version of Pete's infiltration of the police department. Whatever affection I had for Mullins has dried up... he's truly his Alpha's Second, now. The sex between Mo and Yus was delicious. Watching their dynamic evolve and deepen is delightful. Poor Oakley is in for a major disappointment... Bill seems about ready to try and kill Nando. Hopefully the attempt doesn't come at an inopportune time. Which, of course, means it will... Here's hoping one of them gets traded to a new pack at some point before they come to blows...
2/24/25, 8:49 PM
Please continue and keep him locked

2/25/25, 8:24 AM
@[Grzm18](/user/show/10011821) I would think he will be locked whenever coach deems it necessary. Maybe I can see him locking him up whenever he is committed to coach or whenever he is out of line.
Black
2/25/25, 7:14 AM
Please a second part in which he wakes up again in his body and now his brother is the one who uses him
Anon
2/25/25, 3:27 AM
Well...this is interesting, and a bit of a mess. Yousef and his father seems to be settling in well but well...there still is the fact that he and his dad have to figure out how to navigate their human family. I doubt either wants to abandon them. And Oakley is in the mix as well...Mahmood's jealousy is something I am a bit worried about. Hopefully if things can't progress, Oakley can move off amicably. Though it seems they are figuring out how to navigate things. The reference to Schezerade's tales is nice...though hopefully these two never have to say stories to avoid death. I wonder when we're going to start seeing them navigate their cultural background like Rey has with Chavez in light of their new state of being. It seems Ray has met Alpha Spencer during an alcoholics meeting or both have been affiliated with such in the past. It's good to know that they seem...somewhat familiar in that they've experienced the struggle of alcoholism. In particular, I think Ray struggling with not going for the bottle after sensory overload makes sense. I just hope he can keep being involved with the church even as a layperson in some way.... if not as a priest. Spencer seems kind but who knows as an alpha what he may be dealing with. Coups seem to be in season right now. Chavez seems to want to wean Ray off from human baggage, but the question becomes what defines "baggage". They both seem to genuinely be faithful, and that makes what "baggage" is somewhat complex. Toddson as always is his cynical self, but it's clear Chavez genuinely believes in what he says- he's not making things up. Though speaking of Toddson...I had a feeling he'd do something eventually- but to target Paul...and Mullins seems in on this too? That's....not going to end well for either of them. Though honestly, Mullins was starting to edge into being power hungry anyway. On the other hand, whatever happened to Toddson's sister-in-law? Clearly nothing good. And that mysterious caller and letter giver is still about- are they a hunter? I do hope that somebody at least tries to help out with Frank. Bill was researching- but I think something is going to happen with him. He's been feeling alienated and that likely won't end well. I don't think Mahmood is going to like the fact somebody was made a collateral sacrifice over it who wasn't guilty of anything. He likely knows a little too well from the war in Lebanon likely how logic can that can be used to cause terrible things. And even if in this case there was no other way...it's not something I think Mahmood would ever find comfortable.
12/25/24, 10:57 AM
Amazing work i hope to see more ;D

2/24/25, 4:22 PM
@[Wolfgang](/user/show/1286679) Thanks, WG! The next book is up.
2/24/25, 2:45 PM
Hey. I’m really enjoying this series. You’re really on fire with this one It is super hot. I agree with all the comments above. Keep up the good work. :-) No pun intended {though maybe intended } on the word. “up“.😉

2/24/25, 4:20 PM
@[Cracker](/user/show/10023984) Thanks Cracker! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
BottomBoy
2/24/25, 2:11 PM
Holy shit. Sir, this is just...wow. Thank you!!!!!!

2/24/25, 4:19 PM
@BottomBoy Heh, glad you liked it BB. I knew it'd be up your alley.
2/24/25, 3:35 PM
Please please continue!