Recent Comments

2/27/25, 2:50 AM
This might be the best slow burn I've read on this site. Its so sensual without being overtly erotic while still being super hot. There is so much heart in this story and I cannot wait for the next chapter. I'm hooked.
2/26/25, 11:41 PM
So far this has been fantastic! When does Alex realize the dynamic between him and Ethan gives him a lot of power too! It is his submission… the ability to relax and enjoy the ride that provides Ethan his thrill of dominating Alex?
2/26/25, 8:16 PM
Beautiful. There is something about the way you explore the gravitas of each action: the kneeling, the thank you, the smelling, that other authors might just write off in a “matter of fact” way. Certainly looking forward to the next chapter.
2/26/25, 7:15 PM
I love the well-utilized Stranger in a Strange Land reference. One of my favorite books.
2/26/25, 3:06 PM
Just when I think it can’t get any better, it does! Seriously, this story is the perfect balance of emotional and sexual. The scene where Alex sniffs the shoe and gets raised by it was so fucking hot. And then you follow it up with Ethan and Alex both talking about their complicated feelings about this experience. It’s so good! I’m invested in what happens next and his this weekend will affect their friendship. Can’t wait for chapter 4!
2/26/25, 12:17 AM
Amazing! Can't wait to see what happens next.

2/26/25, 2:36 PM
@[JoshAllen](/user/show/10031013) Thanks Josh!
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2/26/25, 2:33 PM
Thanks everyone! I'm working on part 4 now!
2/26/25, 1:36 PM
You have been really good at portraying the dom/sub dynamic so well. The need for trust, control, authority. And not necessarily being sexual. But also the raw emotions of these two guys as the navigate this new reality. I have been gripped by every chapter. I'm glad that Alex wants more; let the real Dom Ethan step forward. How far will they go?
2/26/25, 1:12 PM
Yup. This story is hitting all my buttons in the best way, in a way I didn’t expect. Can’t wait to see where it goes.
2/26/25, 12:11 PM
I've read a ton of great stories here & elsewhere. Not a one of them is better than this one. You are a gifted writer with great insight into the power dynamic. I'm thrown back to my friend & college roommate being Ethan to my Alex. It's amazing. Thank you.