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3/1/25, 8:02 AM
I felt negative enough about the arbitrarily harsh punishment Steve and Kev received early in the chapter that i made the previous comment right after starting the chapter. I'm motivated this time at the end of the story by the up-beat description of Steve learning to fall into subspace. Once again thanks Henry for a very entertaining story. Reading this story is training me to fall into submission, obedience, service, and subspace! It's bliss!
3/1/25, 7:18 AM
Here i am again reading this story again 3 years later! Obviously i really like this story, but i do have a complaint about the behavior of the trainers in this chapter. Steve and Kev were being roomed in the same cell. There was no rule specified about either moving the mattresses together or sleeping right next to the other sub in the same cage. i can see myself taking the punishment without complaint as Steve and Kev are doing just to get through the training week, but i can't ever see myself respecting or choosing to serve a Dominant who was sufficiently arbitrary or needlessly harsh that they would punish subs for supporting each other. i actually respect and admire Dominants who encourage submissive brotherhood for its benefits in building trust, teamwork, contentment, and ultimately the productivity, connection, and commitment most Masters want from their submissives -- at least the Masters i would choose to serve. In terms of building the story i understand that the author is likely deliberately making this training harsher than it needs to be, perhaps leading us appropriately into some aspect of the story coming later. @Henry Wolf Wherever that might be, i do thank you, Henry, for a riveting story.
3/1/25, 5:45 AM
Sorry to be so slow getting back to reading your story, Training Day, and to adding my thanks and my comments for a really enjoyable story. i read so many stories, i often lose track of stories whose development is in progress -- even my favorites. I often ask myself if i was meant to be a submissive, so this story is in a way my easy way out from attending a Sub Training Week in person. Truth tell, i would love to try the real thing.
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3/1/25, 3:39 AM
wow just found this story and its one of the hottest i have read on here i cant stop cumming reading it. the takedown of Mark was soo hot with his conflicting thought but unable to resist. would love a follow up to show how much deeper into submission he has fallen.
2/28/25, 9:41 PM
I really hope that we get a new chapter soon!! I really love this story!!!

2/28/25, 11:38 PM
@[Jjoday018](/user/show/10001108) thank you! i am working on the next chapter :)
2/28/25, 3:22 PM
my favorite series right now!
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2/28/25, 6:15 AM
This is good. I don't really comment but it's a good bit of writing and I come back here often
2/28/25, 4:17 AM
Would love love LOVE more brainwashing scenes. Especially if there's added detail about the process. Loving this series so far
2/27/25, 3:54 AM
The scenes with Yousef and Mo are just… SEARINGLY hot. Amazing stuff. Can’t get enough of them together and figuring out their new dynamic. They’ll be in for a wild family get-together some point in the future haha. I think one of the things that really draws me to them is that idea of reconnection and love being birthed between two people, two men, related or not, all because of Luna. To me, it’s beautiful and the way you depict it feels so lovely—and hot. Can’t wait to read more!

2/27/25, 10:51 PM
@[Kibble The Satyr](/user/show/10010407) Honestly, "searing" really is the best way to describe it!
2/27/25, 2:49 PM
Great story! Loved the details around the slow transference of role and gear. Would love to see the next chapter the dom tagging Mark with his own gear, like a property tag. Definitely more gear play!!!

2/27/25, 2:58 PM
@[forky](/user/show/10002138) Thanks F.