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Oct 1, 2023
Anonymous
3/1/25, 8:01 PM
Some news about this story?
3/1/25, 7:48 PM
"Find out here next time!" It may be cheating but i can't wait until "next time" unless next time takes me immediately to the next chapter! This story has been so hot! I originally found it shortly after it was written, lost track of it while i was off reading dozens of other stories waiting for the story's continuation, and now back again not having to wait for the next chapter or the one after that. i realize i am selfishly considering my own reading pleasure rather than timely comments for the writer's benefit. i know i deserve another flogging. Meanwhile though I'm off to read the next chapters. Steve and i are anxious and excited to see how Mark reacts to Steve's new perspective. Thank you Sir for a wonderful story and your tolerance to my insubordination.
3/1/25, 7:31 PM
This series is absolutely amazing. Can't wait for the next part.
3/1/25, 7:15 PM
Puppy play seemed surprisingly attractive and fun! i love Master Bryce. He knows how to treat his dogs to make them feel loved and devoted to their masters. @Henry Wolf i apologize if my comments lack feedback on your writing style. i am not a writer, but as an avid reader into D/s, M/s, BDSM, and human connection in general i do like to make comments on content and how it makes me feel. i do hope that is helpful.
3/1/25, 1:58 PM
“Subs are property. They are to be used by their owners in any way they see fit". In my mind this is not quite right. This statement negates the concept of consent in consensual enslavement or recognition of agreed upon limits. i understand this is just fiction, but as fiction starts to look more like real slavery, my interest drops. i would prefer to see consensual non-consent and brainwashing brought into the story. Yeah it's still fiction and my preference is a slippery slope. i am thinking i might deserve an additional 20 lashes for my useless comments. If i am to be punished, let's at least make it a fast stinging flogger, not a heavy plodding one. For the purpose of enjoying this story, i will now consent to refrain from making such comments about consensual vs real slavery!! Besides, i am beginning to think i can make it through my training and get my sub certification. :smiley:
3/1/25, 8:02 AM
I felt negative enough about the arbitrarily harsh punishment Steve and Kev received early in the chapter that i made the previous comment right after starting the chapter. I'm motivated this time at the end of the story by the up-beat description of Steve learning to fall into subspace. Once again thanks Henry for a very entertaining story. Reading this story is training me to fall into submission, obedience, service, and subspace! It's bliss!
3/1/25, 7:18 AM
Here i am again reading this story again 3 years later! Obviously i really like this story, but i do have a complaint about the behavior of the trainers in this chapter. Steve and Kev were being roomed in the same cell. There was no rule specified about either moving the mattresses together or sleeping right next to the other sub in the same cage. i can see myself taking the punishment without complaint as Steve and Kev are doing just to get through the training week, but i can't ever see myself respecting or choosing to serve a Dominant who was sufficiently arbitrary or needlessly harsh that they would punish subs for supporting each other. i actually respect and admire Dominants who encourage submissive brotherhood for its benefits in building trust, teamwork, contentment, and ultimately the productivity, connection, and commitment most Masters want from their submissives -- at least the Masters i would choose to serve. In terms of building the story i understand that the author is likely deliberately making this training harsher than it needs to be, perhaps leading us appropriately into some aspect of the story coming later. @Henry Wolf Wherever that might be, i do thank you, Henry, for a riveting story.
3/1/25, 5:45 AM
Sorry to be so slow getting back to reading your story, Training Day, and to adding my thanks and my comments for a really enjoyable story. i read so many stories, i often lose track of stories whose development is in progress -- even my favorites. I often ask myself if i was meant to be a submissive, so this story is in a way my easy way out from attending a Sub Training Week in person. Truth tell, i would love to try the real thing.
Anonymous
3/1/25, 3:39 AM
wow just found this story and its one of the hottest i have read on here i cant stop cumming reading it. the takedown of Mark was soo hot with his conflicting thought but unable to resist. would love a follow up to show how much deeper into submission he has fallen.
2/28/25, 9:41 PM
I really hope that we get a new chapter soon!! I really love this story!!!

2/28/25, 11:38 PM
@[Jjoday018](/user/show/10001108) thank you! i am working on the next chapter :)