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1/23/25, 5:08 AM
Your story idea is great, and got me very turned on even before Steve entered the sub training program; it seemed—seems?—a very well thought out training program and I wish such programs really existed. I very much enjoyed the sub training chapters but toward the end there was a falling off of sexual excitement and my interest. Not that the bones of the story don’t remain interesting; they do. But the last few chapters merely became a dry summary of events, a lot of telling, not showing, when I kept hoping for exciting actions and interactions. I hope things will change, and your response to Luke J makes me think they will, but I do want that to start happening soon. As for the supporting characters, the only one I cared about, and was turned on by, was Kev, and I certainly do hope he’ll make a reappearance, perhaps a little less straight than he started out. As for Mark, he’s never struck me as a particularly interesting character, just a successful young gay businessman, nothing to get excited about there. I’m happy to assume from your answer to Luke J, that Mark’s going to become more of a dom, and kinky; I certainly hope so, because Mark and Steve’s straight gay life together is pretty boring.

3/2/25, 12:53 AM
@[Enc8sed](/user/show/10058818) San Diego has a very active leather community. I haven't lived there for over 15 years now, but I recall they used to have a D/s class which met once a week for a number of weeks. Each week everyone participated in a different training session. Each participant was required to go through each scene once as the Dom and once as the sub so that everyone got a good sense of both roles. Because it was spread out over a number of weeks and seemed very popular, it didn't seem practical if you didn't live in San Diego.
3/2/25, 12:13 AM
I hope you continue this. It's amazing!
3/1/25, 8:05 PM
i am so excited to see how Master Mark and his new sub Steve get along!!
Oct 1, 2023
Anonymous
3/1/25, 8:01 PM
Some news about this story?
3/1/25, 7:48 PM
"Find out here next time!" It may be cheating but i can't wait until "next time" unless next time takes me immediately to the next chapter! This story has been so hot! I originally found it shortly after it was written, lost track of it while i was off reading dozens of other stories waiting for the story's continuation, and now back again not having to wait for the next chapter or the one after that. i realize i am selfishly considering my own reading pleasure rather than timely comments for the writer's benefit. i know i deserve another flogging. Meanwhile though I'm off to read the next chapters. Steve and i are anxious and excited to see how Mark reacts to Steve's new perspective. Thank you Sir for a wonderful story and your tolerance to my insubordination.
3/1/25, 7:31 PM
This series is absolutely amazing. Can't wait for the next part.
3/1/25, 7:15 PM
Puppy play seemed surprisingly attractive and fun! i love Master Bryce. He knows how to treat his dogs to make them feel loved and devoted to their masters. @Henry Wolf i apologize if my comments lack feedback on your writing style. i am not a writer, but as an avid reader into D/s, M/s, BDSM, and human connection in general i do like to make comments on content and how it makes me feel. i do hope that is helpful.
3/1/25, 1:58 PM
“Subs are property. They are to be used by their owners in any way they see fit". In my mind this is not quite right. This statement negates the concept of consent in consensual enslavement or recognition of agreed upon limits. i understand this is just fiction, but as fiction starts to look more like real slavery, my interest drops. i would prefer to see consensual non-consent and brainwashing brought into the story. Yeah it's still fiction and my preference is a slippery slope. i am thinking i might deserve an additional 20 lashes for my useless comments. If i am to be punished, let's at least make it a fast stinging flogger, not a heavy plodding one. For the purpose of enjoying this story, i will now consent to refrain from making such comments about consensual vs real slavery!! Besides, i am beginning to think i can make it through my training and get my sub certification. :smiley:
3/1/25, 8:02 AM
I felt negative enough about the arbitrarily harsh punishment Steve and Kev received early in the chapter that i made the previous comment right after starting the chapter. I'm motivated this time at the end of the story by the up-beat description of Steve learning to fall into subspace. Once again thanks Henry for a very entertaining story. Reading this story is training me to fall into submission, obedience, service, and subspace! It's bliss!
3/1/25, 7:18 AM
Here i am again reading this story again 3 years later! Obviously i really like this story, but i do have a complaint about the behavior of the trainers in this chapter. Steve and Kev were being roomed in the same cell. There was no rule specified about either moving the mattresses together or sleeping right next to the other sub in the same cage. i can see myself taking the punishment without complaint as Steve and Kev are doing just to get through the training week, but i can't ever see myself respecting or choosing to serve a Dominant who was sufficiently arbitrary or needlessly harsh that they would punish subs for supporting each other. i actually respect and admire Dominants who encourage submissive brotherhood for its benefits in building trust, teamwork, contentment, and ultimately the productivity, connection, and commitment most Masters want from their submissives -- at least the Masters i would choose to serve. In terms of building the story i understand that the author is likely deliberately making this training harsher than it needs to be, perhaps leading us appropriately into some aspect of the story coming later. @Henry Wolf Wherever that might be, i do thank you, Henry, for a riveting story.