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Anonymous
3/9/25, 9:09 PM
what happens with the latex cock ring that Kane already has? would be interesting if he becomes a DH

3/9/25, 10:11 PM
@Anonymous It wasn't meant as a conversion element, but a low grade connection to the Network and Master. I like to think that the ring and the plug will work together to send info back to Master. I doubt DH-003 would be happy about getting Kane for a fellow Hound, although I suppose the mind wipe involved in processing a Hound would at least reduce Kane’s personality problems.
3/9/25, 8:50 AM
Such a great story! I imagine Ryan will have his work cut out for him after 86 days of 4 hours of hypno files :) hoping the loop breaks, but that connor still retains some what he's learned
3/9/25, 6:30 AM
Great muscle cop
3/9/25, 4:32 AM
Oh my god! I fucking love this story.
3/9/25, 4:31 AM
This story is fucking hot and **so much fun**! Can't wait to see where it goes and how it ends,
Anonymous
3/9/25, 3:57 AM
Suuuuch a hot story! Definitely keen to see how long this loop goes for!
3/8/25, 10:22 PM
It’s both my kinks and type of plot :D Loving the execution as well
3/8/25, 10:21 AM
Really love how you wrote Connor internalising the Hypno script he's hearing
3/8/25, 7:46 AM
When can we anticipate a part 2?
3/7/25, 10:55 PM
Gladly willing to help theorize! But note this is speculative, I'm not the author and I have a sappiness and romantic bias to everything I read; The central thesis and central point of what Jamie has been through, of what the symbiote has gleaned, of what Master has seen, and even what Luxor and everyone else in the League has realized, is that Jamie is fundamentally a lonely person. He doesn't have friends. He doesn't have anyone left. No family, nothing. I think that is what "Master's" plan is referring to, and I have a suspicion that Dusk will be right with Jamie during his final conversion. Maybe it's a sex scene similar to the fan story with Horizon made by cops. Maybe it's like the dream sequence where the new superdrone holds hands with his fellow superdrone as it joins its "found family". Maybe we can see Jack and Dylan again, both of them encouraging Jamie to give in Onyx was right about the mind bending, but I have reason to believe that it works so damn well on Jamie is because he is fundamentally needy, he craves connection and he wants so badly to be loved and cared for. I'm guessing that's a tiny part of the hook that he used during gym time, and I think Master might manipulate/utilize this vulnerability to the maximum especially now that it's confirmed confirmed there's a crush What exactly will Master toy with his Dusk to find the breakpoint for Jamie to fully submit during the final stage (is that next chapter or the chapter after? I feel like the climax is about to occur, both the story and for Jamie!), but I think that it's a part of what will occur!

3/8/25, 4:44 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I think I agree with pretty much all of that. Good job, tofu.