Recent Comments

3/5/25, 2:13 AM
Fantastic chapter as always. Seriously, the consistency of the writing and the depth you're exploring these characters is impressive. Looking forward to the next one and what you have planned for these two. Also gotta say I appreciate your comments and updates for when you plan to post, etc. Keep it up- loving this story!
3/4/25, 8:54 PM
Hey. The creativity of the way you wrote the superbly unusual idea and approach is really fine. I rarely offer comments on stories. You've done a fine job. I appreciate the way that you let Alex exert his sub's control over his Dom in the last part of this chapter. I had also feared along the way that their underlying friendship would get lost, subsumed, in their explicit sub boy / Dom Man dynamic once it became explicit and acknowledged. I'm glad that you guarded against that. It enhanced the whole story the way you preserved it. (Thanks.) [As a writer here at GayCollar myself, I have one "process" question. I noted a "Collared – Part 59 (Expanded)" that appeared in the text, and another one that I think had the number 57 in it. Were they markers used so as to come back and expand a scene so as not to lose the pace as you wrote the basic story?]

Himbro
3/4/25, 9:03 PM
@[DikThik](/user/show/10003460) Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it! Abs yes to answer your question, I used those titles to keep track of continuity things but looks like I forgot to remove a couple before publishing. Thanks!

3/4/25, 9:31 PM
@[Himbro](/user/show/10021991) One more thing. Just wondering. Is the series concluded or yet to move forward? BTW, I can be reached at [ concuno.isme@outlook.com ]

Himbro
3/4/25, 9:53 PM
@[DikThik](/user/show/10003460) I'll be moving forward, it may be a bit before I can finish up the next chapter, hence the length on this one
3/4/25, 7:07 PM
This is such a a great series. Really liking the direction is continues to take
3/4/25, 5:48 PM
Every chapter just keeps getting better. And so regularly, I'm not just reading, I'm being in it. All my focus is on these words. These scenes. You make it feel so real, and that is a huge accomplishment. And thank you for keeping the rubber going and not just a step in Ethan's plans. Muscle rubber toys are so rare. I'm so eager to read how they move forward once this bet is over.
3/4/25, 5:21 PM
Over these 37,000 words or so You have carved out a space in my head, owning that spot. As I read i was deep in the story but another part of my brain was thinking about the praise I wanted to send back. Then we were back in the apartment and the writing had be feeling like I was intruding into an intimate moment I had no business being witness to. It was moving. And I questioned if I even had to right to. That's the result of powerful writing and life experiences highly relatable but wo that awesome tech. Thank you. I think i'd serve you in a heartbeat
3/4/25, 7:22 AM
Amazing chapter, the intensive edging that follows all this submission/domination made me burst with pleasure. Keep it up ! Great work and congratulations.
HypnoMutt
3/4/25, 3:16 AM
🫡🙏
3/4/25, 1:14 AM
Such an intense, slow burn. Ethan's road of discovery is also exquisite. Extraordinary writing.
3/3/25, 10:44 PM
Hot!
Himbro
3/3/25, 9:11 PM
I appreciate all the feedback and comments everyone! I'm glad that everyone is enjoying the story so far. I just published part 5 and it's quite a long chapter so I hope everyone is ready. There may be a gap while I'm away before chapter 6 so hopefully it'll be enough to keep every horny or empty of the writing is good enough until it's out.