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3/6/25, 6:00 PM
WOW!… just fucking WOW!!! The emotional connection and brilliantly hot lovemaking (far beyond just basic sex) just blew me away, twice. 😜. Absman 420 is 100% correct in that it is the emotional content that really makes a story sizzle, and this one is cooking on the front burner. Very much looking forward to more and well done amigo!!! 🎉

3/6/25, 11:21 PM
@[Bjort](/user/show/10002297) Thank you! The sex scene is what's going to set everything in motion- it's the first of the dominos in this plot! Everything from here on out is going to trace back to this moment. I'm glad guys are eating it up!
Btm
3/6/25, 8:26 PM
Would love to read more in this series
3/6/25, 4:28 AM
What an amazing sex scene. Well done! Excited to see what taboo Brian committed. I assumed from the longing possessiveness he was already planning to turn Pat

3/6/25, 11:36 AM
@[OtterBear92](/user/show/995167) Brian's transgression, and the gravity of it, will be explained in due time. You're not entirely wrong, but there's a deeper reason for it...

3/6/25, 6:07 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) I’m SO excited for it. It’s hot AND it has depth! Well done!!!
3/6/25, 6:04 PM
Ooooo wonder who might be a candidate to be a Were-bear. Poor Oakley! 😟
3/6/25, 7:01 AM
wufffffffffffff..... exceptional
3/6/25, 3:24 AM
I was so happy to see this series updated!! I loved this chapter and I'm really enjoying the fine line being walked between arousal and fear. I second the praise for the dialogue too, it's super well written and the characters feel very rounded and alive! I can't wait to read more!!

3/6/25, 3:43 AM
@[JimsJorts](/user/show/10008527) Thank you! For the dialogue, I try to put myself in each character’s shoes, identify where their thoughts and emotions are at in the moment, and type what comes to mind- I think this method captures the flow of real life conversation well.
3/5/25, 3:45 PM
Nothing easy about writing a sex scene, but you recognized that our emotional investment in the characters makes the sex so much more powerful. Well done, my friend! And compliments to your dialogue -- reads very naturally, just like people talking.

3/5/25, 10:00 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thank you! This is high praise, coming from a man who has written sex scenes that I still revisit to this day, at least a decade on from when he originally discovered them! I want my sex scenes to serve the plot and emotional beats of the story: I still want them to be fun and sexy and for guys to read them one-handed, but the sex should flow naturally from the emotions of a scene. Characters fuck because of something that happened between them, or something happens between them because they fuck. Like how in musicals, characters start singing when the emotions get too big for simple dialogue, but here, instead of breaking out into Sondheim, they reenact Tom of Finland pictures!
Anonymous
3/5/25, 7:29 PM
Ohhh, I love it! I'm really enjoying this story! Personally, I'd love to know what happened to actor Chis Pewter from Chapter 2 in a later chapter (or in a spinoff, maybe?), I loved how the deeper he went into the interview, the progressively dumber he got. It would be really hot to see him on the set of a sequel, or in a later movie. I imagine the effects would be quite pronounced then!
3/5/25, 3:03 PM
Glad to see a new chapter :)