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3/7/25, 10:55 PM
Gladly willing to help theorize! But note this is speculative, I'm not the author and I have a sappiness and romantic bias to everything I read; The central thesis and central point of what Jamie has been through, of what the symbiote has gleaned, of what Master has seen, and even what Luxor and everyone else in the League has realized, is that Jamie is fundamentally a lonely person. He doesn't have friends. He doesn't have anyone left. No family, nothing. I think that is what "Master's" plan is referring to, and I have a suspicion that Dusk will be right with Jamie during his final conversion. Maybe it's a sex scene similar to the fan story with Horizon made by cops. Maybe it's like the dream sequence where the new superdrone holds hands with his fellow superdrone as it joins its "found family". Maybe we can see Jack and Dylan again, both of them encouraging Jamie to give in Onyx was right about the mind bending, but I have reason to believe that it works so damn well on Jamie is because he is fundamentally needy, he craves connection and he wants so badly to be loved and cared for. I'm guessing that's a tiny part of the hook that he used during gym time, and I think Master might manipulate/utilize this vulnerability to the maximum especially now that it's confirmed confirmed there's a crush What exactly will Master toy with his Dusk to find the breakpoint for Jamie to fully submit during the final stage (is that next chapter or the chapter after? I feel like the climax is about to occur, both the story and for Jamie!), but I think that it's a part of what will occur!

3/8/25, 4:44 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I think I agree with pretty much all of that. Good job, tofu.
3/7/25, 3:41 PM
I guess you can't rush greatness, though I would if I could. There's a lot to noodle through here, not to mention a lot of fun. First, as before, I love being in Dusk's head, and the insight we get into his transition from a hero to supervillain’s superdrone slave. We know the basic change is voluntary, but in light of Onyx's musing on Brainwashing and Master's ability to do it, I'd wager that a lot of his submission and negation of self and slave mentality is more brainwashing than Archie’s natural tendencies. That said, it does seem that Archie was an enthusiastic participant in his own brainwashing. Then there's Jamie. Somehow, it doesn’t seem like seeing Dusk's origin story is a particularly good way to soothe his fear of Master turning him into a mindless puppet slave, since he got to see Archie becoming exactly that. But if he bothers to think about of it, he'll realize that even with all he saw, Archie is still there under all the Dusk, and still very much himself. Still, Jamie’s analogy of the "choice" he's been given to two doors with one of them set on fire is so spot on. Why was Master so pleased with what Dusk accomplished in the dream meeting, and what exactly was Dusk right about? Was Master's satisfaction just from Dusk/Archie putting the first cracks in Jamie's "NO"? Moving on, do you think Dusk is going to be pissed at Onyx's sexual use of Jamie? Or will he recognize it as furthering the cause of bringing Jamie under Master's control? Milo/DH-003's interaction with Kane is priceless. I love the way DH-003's mask falls away as soon as Kane is lost in the Network. Kane even deserves a lot of his contempt. And the memory transmitting buttplug is a truly creative and fun device. That's it for starters, though I'll likely have more to say, and would love to see thoughts and theories from everyone.
3/7/25, 8:32 AM
The much awaited continuation is finally here and it was really good too! Kinda sad Kane isnt gonna get the full superslave treatment. I know he's been an asshole the whole time and treated Jamie like a real jerk, but I was hoping he'd get a redemption arc and the two would end of friends and bond as they both fall to the master's control. Oh well, hopefully he'll do a good job as a mole and help expose the leagues corruption
3/7/25, 7:16 AM
I was worried that this story was done for. But alas, it is not and holy hell was it a good chapter. Eager to read more!
Niko
3/6/25, 11:11 PM
I've been fiddling with AI picture generation myself, lately. May I ask which AI generator you're using? Currently, I use https://perchance.org/ai-text-to-image-generator, but it's not perfect...

3/7/25, 6:06 AM
@[Niko](/user/show/992975) promptchan, but even that isn't perfect. I had to generate multiple images just to get one that kinda meets my description.
3/7/25, 4:19 AM
Thank you @ NeonDemon
3/7/25, 2:12 AM
I am SO happy to see you back with a new chapter! I had come to think the story was done for. Thank you for keeping this going! Reading this new chapter has made my evening.

3/7/25, 4:17 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Hear here!
3/6/25, 6:00 PM
WOW!… just fucking WOW!!! The emotional connection and brilliantly hot lovemaking (far beyond just basic sex) just blew me away, twice. 😜. Absman 420 is 100% correct in that it is the emotional content that really makes a story sizzle, and this one is cooking on the front burner. Very much looking forward to more and well done amigo!!! 🎉

3/6/25, 11:21 PM
@[Bjort](/user/show/10002297) Thank you! The sex scene is what's going to set everything in motion- it's the first of the dominos in this plot! Everything from here on out is going to trace back to this moment. I'm glad guys are eating it up!
Btm
3/6/25, 8:26 PM
Would love to read more in this series
3/6/25, 4:28 AM
What an amazing sex scene. Well done! Excited to see what taboo Brian committed. I assumed from the longing possessiveness he was already planning to turn Pat

3/6/25, 11:36 AM
@[OtterBear92](/user/show/995167) Brian's transgression, and the gravity of it, will be explained in due time. You're not entirely wrong, but there's a deeper reason for it...

3/6/25, 6:07 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) I’m SO excited for it. It’s hot AND it has depth! Well done!!!