Recent Comments

9/25/25, 2:34 AM
I love that Yates is the epitome of a perfect Sir. Doms take control (which is great if that's what you want) but Sirs take both control and responsibility. Yates protective nature is incredibly sweet and so incredibly hot and if I was in Trent's shoes, I would have begged just as much as he did to become a devotee. I prefer the term 'boy' personally but would drop to my knees the second Yates called me anything, no matter the title. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, regardless of how long it takes! And it may be a matter of semantics but I think boy still works but instead of saying I'm going out with the boys, he would say I'm going out with **My** boys

9/25/25, 4:28 AM
@[PSExplorer](/user/show/10064257) First I'm glad you are enjoying the story and Yates. He is very protective, it's part of what drove him to become a Seal, but he's also claimed Max knowing what he was doing but not willing to give up the pleasure so there is that. And they are all lucky men. As for boys, I get where you're coming from, the difference, and one I'm trying to dive into, is that Yates himself isn't kinky, not before all this. So a lot of standard tropes aren't standard. For him the boys is the team heading out after practice, or the other sailors heading out for beers. he's got a very different mindset. at least for now.

9/25/25, 5:23 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) Wow, ok, that makes perfect sense. From Yates' view, they are the same right now, hopefully he explores the kink world more, you kinda hinted to that in this chapter. Anyways, thank you for a great story. I actually care about these characters because it's obvious (even more so now) that you've put a lot of thought into each of them. I'm looking forward to seeing how all of this plays out.

9/25/25, 5:37 AM
@[PSExplorer](/user/show/10064257) Yates knows that Declyn, Max and Trent aren't his equals, his gut (unknowingly reenforced by Erame) tells him that. Which is why boys doesn't work. For him going out with the boys was going out with his team in high school, his equals, going out with his military teammates, still his equals. He wouldn't see "the boys" as submissives. He would only know 50 shades level of kink stuff before his first looks into Max and Trent's heads. They have a lot to teach him.

9/25/25, 5:40 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) looking forward to his education...:smiling_imp:
9/23/25, 5:57 PM
What an intriguing and horny beginning!
BaraB3ar
9/22/25, 8:47 AM
I can't describe how good this story is, i can easily give it a 5 in all categories because how good it is and manages to bring them all together perfectly. This is the second story of you on this site and i can already say youre my fave writer here.

9/23/25, 2:42 AM
@[BaraB3ar](/user/show/10058378) Wow, your favorite writer on here? Thank you so much for the high compliment and that glowing review of my story! I always appreciate it. Hope you’ll enjoy what I write in the future too.
9/22/25, 4:27 AM
So what happened to his party

9/23/25, 2:41 AM
@[Reddogsss](/user/show/10033308) I’ll leave that up to your imagination.
9/22/25, 6:15 AM
Damn, this was so fucking hot! Love all the subby daddies just begging for the cocks of these young studs. Hope you continue, really interested in that coach.
9/22/25, 3:25 AM
loved this story all the way through from the beginning...more i read the more i felt like i was being programmed...so hot. wondering where it is going from here now that Mike is responding to training without being triggered
9/22/25, 2:34 AM
Great story. I wonder if they're gonna find something else that's worse than a centaur boyfriend with a huge dick lol.
9/21/25, 10:21 PM
Bienvenidos a la zona de comentario, las nalgas del boxeador de Milton en esta ocasión estarán “sujetando" cada comentario que coloques -Marshall quería participar pero sus enormes huevos tapan toda la entrada-. No tengan miedo, su culo está más que preparado para recibir los comentarios más largos posibles :peach:
9/21/25, 10:00 PM
Very curious to see where this goes!!!
9/20/25, 10:55 PM
Fantastic!

9/20/25, 11:27 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Why, thank you!

9/21/25, 4:42 PM
@[KiwiScribe](/user/show/10046789) Actually let me give you a more specific comment. One thing that I particularly liked in this story is that you acknowledge that the orc's dick was anatomically too much for a human being, and you included a transformation effect to make the human able to be a good cock sleeve. Not even just an anal stretch but an oral transformation as well. This is really important to me because when this detail gets left out of stories like this, it pulls me out of it. Plus I think this kind of subtle transformation that enables fantasy sex to happen is sexy. Well that's why I had an element like that in Sex and Cantrip/The Third Key.

9/21/25, 5:12 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) I appreciate the detailed comment! Specific feedback is always something that I really enjoy reading, because it lets me know exactly what I’m doing right. I’m happy that you enjoyed the subtle transformation aspect of my story. Like you said, I knew that with the proportions I gave the orc, I couldn’t have him just have sex with a human. I thought that I could make the transformation aspect pretty hot and I knew it would make things more feasible. I’m happy you thought it was a good inclusion!