Recent Comments

wizzywod
9/30/24, 11:54 PM
Mmm, this is really good! I'd be interested in finding out more about how Kris is affected here. He obviously always had something for it judging from the boner in the first chapter, but is there more to it? Is he also receiving some kind of chemical or subliminal alterations to solidify his position as 'Top' in the new hierarchy? I'll be honest, I'd much prefer if this kept to monogamy, or at least one main relationship between them even in the end.

3/17/25, 11:57 AM
@wizzywod Thank you for prompting me to broaden the focus out a little to Kris too, made a difference in Chapter 4 for sure.
8/8/24, 2:23 PM
Oh, my favorite is back

3/17/25, 11:56 AM
@[tomtales](/user/show/10001207) The idea I'm anyone's fave on this site is incredibly motivating for me, thank you.
8/8/24, 4:47 AM
Holy shiiiit this is pushing all of my bimboi buttons!!

3/17/25, 11:55 AM
@[scablevoled](/user/show/10000574) Very glad to hear, thank you for the comment.
11/30/24, 6:11 PM
The series is really hot! Just found the first story because it has less words.. and well needed to read the whole thing..

3/17/25, 11:43 AM
@[Chavvyluce](/user/show/10006621) Thank you very much. I promise no subliminals were overlayed on my stories to pull at the mind of readers and compel them to become addicted to my writing.
10/29/24, 6:09 PM
Hot, hot, fucking hot. Between this and Thinking Pink you are one of my favorite writers on here.

3/17/25, 11:40 AM
@[Woodrow Writes](/user/show/424421) Ah! That means so much to me, thank you. Very motivating to be told that.
10/23/24, 9:04 PM
Really nice. Read the whole series today. Want to see where this goes. How deep it goes for Kris and Heath, how wide it goes out into the world?! I hope Heath retains enough brain cells that he can still manage to be in the plot! Very hot!

3/17/25, 11:40 AM
@[Coq au Vin](/user/show/916716) Thank you very much. Currently I'm mainly working on other stories but rest assured, I will be returning to this setting and to Heath.
10/23/24, 8:19 PM
Delicious details and world-building. And seeing the changes in Kris’s mindset is just as hot as Heath’s transformation.

3/17/25, 11:39 AM
@[Catalust](/user/show/920370) Thank you very much.
Muscle-Flex
3/17/25, 1:52 AM
Oh man! This one even surpassed the first chapter. A great example of taking a simple scene and playing it out nice and slow like cooking a rich sauce. Ethan's chuckles and whispers and teasing taunts were perfect. Let's just say that I achieved what Jason could not. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
3/16/25, 9:43 PM
Super hot stuff man. Great job

3/17/25, 1:45 AM
@[Cervello](/user/show/354726) Oh my goodness! Dude I love your work. That’s such a huge compliment coming from you. Thank you!
Muscle-Flex
3/17/25, 1:40 AM
Ditto what Mesopholese said! The pacing of Troy's submission was really hot.